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A poet strive for perfection 
Someday his work will become a worldly reflection 
Of whom he is 
With each line he procrastinate, 

With each verse, 
Reaction, pro action and anticipation 
To the point 
Of debating or reconstructing his latest 
Despite receiving favorable reviews 

Should I read it out loud? 
Or should I let it simmer 
And invited samplers to sample my work 
Too many mind and voices 
Can be influential

Unlike a Sunday buffet his poem 
Is not the main course? 

His work is his ode 
So he becomes a prolific composer. 

Author note: 
To be or not to be this is the question
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Falotico Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 4:41 PM
Truer then true. Perfectly said. Hugs Michael
Lander Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Thank you Michael J.
Liwayway Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:28 AM
great write friend Annie...i like your poem :) thanks for sharing and thanks for stopping by. Have a blessed day always. hugs **Maria**
Lander Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 9:31 AM
Thank you Maria Paz S for the encourgement .... my daily task is to compose a poem daily one love annie
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 6:15 AM
Yes it's true Annie, well said in your poem - like it -To be or not to be this is the question - Have a lovely new week! - oxox Anne-Lise :)
Lander Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:05 AM
Thank you Anne L..you have a lovely week also it's so cold today here.. one love annie
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