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A poet strive for perfection 
Someday his work will become a worldly reflection 
Of whom he is 
With each line he procrastinate, 

With each verse, 
Reaction, pro action and anticipation 
To the point 
Of debating or reconstructing his latest 
Despite receiving favorable reviews 

Should I read it out loud? 
Or should I let it simmer 
And invited samplers to sample my work 
Too many mind and voices 
Can be influential

Unlike a Sunday buffet his poem 
Is not the main course? 

His work is his ode 
So he becomes a prolific composer. 

Author note: 
To be or not to be this is the question

Copyright © Annie Lander | Year Posted 2012

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Michael J. Falotico Date: 10/15/2012 4:41:00 PM Truer then true. Perfectly said. Hugs Michael Login to Reply Annie Lander Date: 10/19/2012 3:47:00 PM Thank you Michael J.

Bukang Liwayway Date: 10/15/2012 8:28:00 AM great write friend Annie...i like your poem :) thanks for sharing and thanks for stopping by. Have a blessed day always. hugs **Maria** Login to Reply Annie Lander Date: 10/15/2012 9:31:00 AM Thank you Maria Paz S for the encourgement .... my daily task is to compose a poem daily one love annie

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/15/2012 6:15:00 AM Yes it's true Annie, well said in your poem - like it -To be or not to be this is the question - Have a lovely new week! - oxox Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Annie Lander Date: 10/15/2012 8:05:00 AM Thank you Anne L..you have a lovely week also it's so cold today here.. one love annie