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Feedback, A poet strive for perfection Someday his work will become a worldly reflection Of whom he is With each line he procrastinate, With each verse, Reaction, pro action and anticipation To the point Of debating or reconstructing his latest Despite receiving favorable reviews Should I read it out loud? Or should I let it simmer And invited samplers to sample my work Too many mind and voices Can be influential Unlike a Sunday buffet his poem Is not the main course? His work is his ode So he becomes a prolific composer. Author note: To be or not to be this is the question

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/15/2012 4:41:00 PM

Truer then true. Perfectly said. Hugs Michael

Annie Lander
Date: 10/19/2012 3:47:00 PM

Thank you Michael J.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/15/2012 8:28:00 AM

great write friend Annie...i like your poem :) thanks for sharing and thanks for stopping by. Have a blessed day always. hugs **Maria**

Annie Lander
Date: 10/15/2012 9:31:00 AM

Thank you Maria Paz S for the encourgement .... my daily task is to compose a poem daily one love annie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2012 6:15:00 AM

Yes it's true Annie, well said in your poem - like it -To be or not to be this is the question - Have a lovely new week! - oxox Anne-Lise :)

Annie Lander
Date: 10/15/2012 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Anne L..you have a lovely week also it's so cold today here.. one love annie