Kintsugi

when her shadow cracked

fragments entered her mind

shards of false gold

pierced façade and persona

left her in pieces

splintered images and illusions


the mask had been held tight

a rope strangled the puppet

clown’s grimace incised

by strings of attachment

and forced assimilation


a mirage in the making

projection of fake courage

pied piper tune on the march

dissonant shrieking contour

silhouette of crushed empty words


with no choice left

she picked up the pieces

and timid surface tension

adhered to the task

of reconstructing a narrative

without othering

gendering

ab-normalising all rupture


when she looked at the mosaic

the patchwork montage

appeared more sustainable

self-sufficient and rewarding

as the sum of all parts

had been hidden in a whole

where the light needed to fill

crevices and fissures


and she began to accept

time lines and gaps

which assembled 

the shape of outlines 

of necessary change 


12th August 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/12/2021 3:04:00 PM
This is some constructive poetry from a reconstructive art, a painstaking seemingly impossible process to try put life back together, reflected brilliantly using the Kintsugi as a blueprint, unique and imaginative writing as always, cheers David
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/13/2021 7:40:00 AM
Thank you David. I appreciate that. And now I finally know a posh word for what I am doing ... kintsugi XXX David
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