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Premium Member Longing In Covert Crypt


The meadow of my mind 
dried desolate as the desert dune.
The mist of concealed passion 
suspended with mystique opacity 
in the sunk halcyon horizon, 
waited for the southern wind 
to surreptitiously blow 
from the fervent sparkling sky 
with your sequined charisma,
swathing the shades of my blue.

In the titular template of loneliness,
the secret motif of my longing
designed the lattice of desire, 
carved the furtive image of my heart,
the quivering willow in the wilderness.

The dormant dreams blazed in inferno;
I breathed the ashen memory smoke
afloat stealthily in the sky of vacuity.
The design of desolation intertwined  
the splinters of my desire icons,
flew on the trajectory of covert longing 
to the clandestine corral of anonymity,      
lay within the poignant crypt 
as the skeletons in the closet.

Society's tumour


Voracity not veracity mendacity groomer

Capacity for pugnacity is not a rumour

Rapacity of the seedy needy consumer

Sagacity no audacity of the baby boomer

Morality calamity stalks like a greedy puma

Tenacity but with no candour or humour

Opacity because their salacity is a tumour

Premium Member The State of the -city

  
         Veracity is plagued by opacity

            Mendacity has unlimited capacity


Premium Member Cloud Support

Cradled in fleecy white cumulus
Cherubs lie, cousins of sirens,
Seductively fondling their harps
Enacting a vision of heaven
For hope’s dreaming eyes to see

From the riverbank, gloomy grey masses
Are strung with gleaming white light points
Immensity nurtures the tiny.
A celestial vision of tinnitus
Admonishes who would look up.

The secret connection is softness:
Deceptive opacity no cradle
Divine prankster opens the trapdoor
Atmospheric perspective enabled
Unknown dimensions embrace

Opacity

The mirror poses 
with a strangers heart, 
gazing in accusation,
Nameless. 
Faceless. 
An incarnation of pain 
possessing the body,
And yet — 
I reach. 
For that obsidian glaze.
For the opacity that hides your face. 
For a remnant of strength.
For salvation. 
For something that still remembers my name.

Premium Member Rubber Worms

Truth comes in one golden droplet.
You wait like a blind baby sparrow.
But mom can only bring a rubber worm.
Eventually the sweet droplet meets 
the soul's red parched beak.

A lie frequently comes in buckets.
An endless deluge of infinite confusion.
A black thorned brackish delusion.
But a lie will collapse under its own weight.
Transparency always devours opacity.


Premium Member In a realm of tranquil illusions, weary spirits find thrones of comfort

In a realm of tranquil illusions, weary spirits find thrones of comfort,
Lives frozen in monotonous dances, dolls forgotten in the windows of dead time,
Middle-aged souls, ghosts of lost hope, nestle into routine,
The leaden embrace of stagnation promises them an eternity of divine peace.
Deep within the soul, fear sneaks in like an underground stream,
The fear that fragile order is a sandcastle, a vain illusion,
They retreat into mental bunkers, hiding their dreams and unspoken fears,
Hoping the walls of silence will keep change at bay, unspoken promises.
But time, a tireless sculptor, spins its chisel on the face of reality,
Each moment leaves a mark, a reminder of the ephemeral,
Stagnation is but an illusion, true life awaits beyond the walls,
Demanding the courage to step into the unknown, to emerge from labyrinths.
Between the walls of silence, souls sing the longing for freedom,
A yearning that pulses like a heart beneath resignation, beneath opacity,
Rays of light pierce through the cracks in the walls, reminding them of the river,
Life flows unceasingly, calling them to embrace their living destiny.

The beacons of light

As darkness wriggled into every place,

The land was governed by a veil of silence.

The previous vivid life had left no trace,

All but some crickets singing in defiance.



The mortal realm stood petrified as though

Succumbing to the conquest of the night.

However, in the sky, a tiny glow

Was rather willing to put up a fight.



What a one-sided clash of force

Conducted by the rebel and the tyrant,

And yet a brutal one without remorse

Between the little David and the giant.



Oh, how alike we were, the lonely star

That dwelled in an unfathomed galaxy!

Though separated by a space too far,

We both possessed a common destiny.



We were the beacons of sagacity,

The last remaining citadels of light

Amidst the ocean of opacity

That wrapped the whole world in the depths of night.

REFUTED

I dreamt of growing 
As I was drowning 
life was blocked with stones
I was just a vessel that turned

Sincerity would bring love
I thought that's the rule of the world 
I leaned on opacity with unsolicited words
I chose the disgrace with no rewards
 
The nights notched me with a sharp hilt
Days kept becoming dark till I quit
The days were filled with cold and looked so gray
Sometimes cant even remember the words and the day

A piece of paper wasn't the reason 
Walked for miles with no destination 
A part of me shielded all of the harms
I searched for love in the wrong arms

I became the center of the joke
How I left my life on the nook 
I became a puppet of the show
The circus disgraced all my value

My soldiers were badly harmed
yet I sent them to combat
7 years passed 
The war yet last 

They didn't realise untill the end
How I kept losing for them
I achieved a death with no respect 
I left the battle tired and refuted 

I'm drowning yet
I accept my cruel fate

Premium Member OPEN VERSE 5-6

CHANGE
obvious
  abrupt hiatus
distinctive
  light
& shadow
contrastive
  focussed
in
visible
  autonomy
blurred
impressions
with
  striking
effect
  evolving
in
slight
  elevation
subtly
  subverted
in
fleeting
  glimpses
dictated
  by chance
OPACITY
phenomena
in distinct
contours
  of
ornamental
simplicity
  consolidated
in
 controversial
conception
&
recollection
 of repeated
quality
so consummate
&
finely drawn
contrast
uniquely
  positioned
in a
  genesis
of memorable
&
blissful feelings
accentuated
by curving
  contours
announced
&enhanced

confirmed with emphasis
& enthusiasm

Premium Member KOMOREBI

       KOMOREBI

        Pushing dense bush walking in pathless forest
        under tree canopy, continuous.
        At dawn sun rays penetrating at best,
         torching dark tunnel , making luminous.

       Sunbeams filtered by leaves and foliage
       interplaying sheen and shade to astound.
       Komorebi  cast on dappled image
       forming lovely lattice on forest ground.

        Komorebi caused by leaf lamina.
        Pretty patterns to adorn forest floor.
        Sunlight is sieved by leafage patina.
        Wonder and dreams of sunbeam to adore.

        Morn glow of Komorebi ! End of night.
        Dark shadowed tunnel on opacity,
        finding flash of thin shafts of twinkled light.
        Profound pure pristine tranquility .
        
        When sunlight shines through tree in environ
         Contrast of light and shadow to receive 
         on re-energised radiant ion,
         Komorebi  to charm at morn and eve.

Magic Roundabout La Ronde Ii

She wears curtains in her eyes
Uses them like a surgical knife
Draws them closed each day
To cut and blank out her daily life
And she slides in the needle
That helps her to find
The matching opacity
Of her tortured mind

Her strength and her addiction
That gets her through each day
Of the life she has to lead
To find the money to pay
For the contents of that needle
So you think her eyes are dead
As you pass her on the street
Just two dull orbs in her head

And sometimes you may think
From her dull eyed stare
She’s not in this world but
In her own hell somewhere
And she nightly works the streets
Harassed, ridiculed, abused
And so many occasions
Just paid for and used

And sometimes for a while
Her eyes are opened wide
Until she slips in her needle
And relief pours back inside
And she resumes her life
As an underclass pawn
As those curtains in her eyes
Are closed and tightly drawn

Premium Member Cyclonic Storm

Dawn arrived beleaguered
and redrew the peaks 
across a bruised sky that churned
a displeased blue and pewter.

Soon lightening, a brilliant white
with titanium opacity,
crackled with scraunches
and screeches across the horizon.

Rain labored brutishly
against the grueling winds
savaging the already sodden,
soppy, soupy earth.

Multi-dimensional, phantasmagoric,
noctidial nightmare till, conterminally,
the broken sky refashioned itself 
in vivid electric pink and tangerine.

Melancholia

weepy, faraway freak under
imaginary interrogation lights -
they sear into clandestine
melancholy 

she has tried so hard to keep it concealed,
but water touched by flame cannot 
pretend it doesn't boil

downcast eyes so they cannot sense
the well's depth and opacity -
mouth corners pinned into
a permanent grin -
don't let it twist to grimace

their careful words morph into the
dull hum of cicadas -
gripped by her hidden wreckage
her tears bubble up to the surface

deluge from the deep

Premium Member New Life

Vanity and desire innately compulsive
distort the ethos of obdurate ego,
conditioning the vision to look at others,
for self-consciousness turns opaque layer.

Divine intervention in life reborn,
shreds the strata of opacity,
plain self-image escapes egocentricity,
gets transfixed within empathy frame.

In the hued horizon of the new life
the nascent sun of adoration rises,
paints all the pining hearts
with the perceptive colors of love.

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July 10, 2022
Contest : Ego Shorn, Here Now Reborn
Sponsored by : Unseeking Seeker

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