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Cyclonic Storm

Dawn arrived beleaguered and redrew the peaks across a bruised sky that churned a displeased blue and pewter. Soon lightening, a brilliant white with titanium opacity, crackled with scraunches and screeches across the horizon. Rain labored brutishly against the grueling winds savaging the already sodden, soppy, soupy earth. Multi-dimensional, phantasmagoric, noctidial nightmare till, conterminally, the broken sky refashioned itself in vivid electric pink and tangerine.

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Date: 2/1/2023 3:38:00 PM
Linda I got to the last stanza and bit my tongue -.- Good grief Lady I have to go grab a dictionary! That doesn't happen often lol.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/2/2023 6:32:00 AM
Haha. My intent was not to send you to the dictionary FJ. My fingers got away from me for a couple of lines. LOL Linda Alice
Date: 1/31/2023 8:39:00 AM
Looove the wording in this Linda, fantastic imagery, I love a good storm! Good luck to you :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/31/2023 8:47:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed my storm Hat.I enjoy a good storm too. Maybe I'll be a stop chaser in my next life LOL. Thanks for stopping by with kind comments! :)
Date: 1/31/2023 1:32:00 AM
This is striking and amazing. Great poem :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/31/2023 6:30:00 AM
Many thanks Heidi. I appreciate you comments. :)
Date: 1/30/2023 10:23:00 PM
Metaphorically enjoyed its trend, Linda, you've done exceptionally well, all my best, Aloha William
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/31/2023 6:29:00 AM
Your words are warmly received William. Thank you. Stay well. :)
Date: 1/29/2023 12:39:00 PM
A poem filled with excellent imagery that is both engaging and exciting to read. I hope you do well in the contest, my friend.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/29/2023 1:41:00 PM
Many thanks my friend Lasaad. Your comments warm my heart! :)
Date: 1/29/2023 12:04:00 PM
Precise description of a storm. We are having a lot of them lately especially at night Not that I'm afraid of the flashes. Best for a win.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/29/2023 1:40:00 PM
Thank you dear Victor. Stay safe. :)

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