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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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OPEN VERSE 5-6

CHANGE
obvious
  abrupt hiatus
distinctive
  light
& shadow
contrastive
  focussed
in
visible
  autonomy
blurred
impressions
with
  striking
effect
  evolving
in
slight
  elevation
subtly
  subverted
in
fleeting
  glimpses
dictated
  by chance
OPACITY
phenomena
in distinct
contours
  of
ornamental
simplicity
  consolidated
in
 controversial
conception
&
recollection
 of repeated
quality
so consummate
&
finely drawn
contrast
uniquely
  positioned
in a
  genesis
of memorable
&
blissful feelings
accentuated
by curving
  contours
announced
&enhanced

confirmed with emphasis
& enthusiasm
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