Mistaking Poems | Examples

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Enchantress by Konstantin Somov

I contort
      to place 
  my fingers
       on your frame 
   hoping I'll be mirrored there
            creep around myself
    whispering in my ear 
 of my own existence  
        mistaking subdued lighting 
     for gathering darkness
             a flash of light for salvation 
        there is an avenue of trees
              lined with stepping stones of shadow 
      I don't see it
I enchant myself
          knowing the spell wears off 
     it's a powerful skill
   but it doesn't make me feel better

Premium Member This Is For You, Dr. Suess

zesty ropedancer meaningfully hobnailed honeydew folklore evermore
myriad sunburn translocation sapiently mistaking your platypus
impious prognosticator gnaw mono recordbook thereabouts


(Weekly Magnetic Poetry Challenge • August 17–23, 2026)

Magnetic Game on PoetrySoup

can unvalued birthright animalize careless communications
indwelling deflective dejection again
mistaking recency with indelicate internment
she is psychoanalytic


(Weekly Magnetic Poetry Challenge • August 17–23, 2026)


Premium Member Bunny Getting A Karat

always abatable from
anyplace but tuscaloosa
cockamamy downstream bunny
descriptive complain brewing
mistaking birthright crisis
meaningfully turmoil tryst
unvalued unpasteurized ureteritis
stewing vaticinate dejection
deflective firm folklore
through gynecologist communications
episodic honeydew gnaw
a crisply blunted
cheeseboard doorstopper looping
merry as can
be for evermore


(Weekly Magnetic Poetry Challenge • August 17–23, 2026)

Premium Member ALLITERATIVE CINQUAIN AUG 17

an axiomatic   actuary always axiomatically anyplace again
could credulously careless cubist complain crisply to cezanne 
I,in impious indelicate indwelling ionized internment
me,meaningfully merry, mistaking my myriad mono
telefax this turmoil & toil thereabouts through to their tryst

Premium Member I Am Through

your always mistaking her for me . that is careless and indelicate : I am through with you !


(Weekly Magnetic Poetry Challenge • August 17–23, 2026)


L'etoile Matinale

        I see only dread 
  in the break of day 
           if I lie with my thoughts
      they'll devour me

     all concepts lead 
         to forked tongues
I trust nothing
    as I know of the arrows
             shooting left and right 

         until this dread is swallowed 
   starts to occupy within, by my own hand
and I cough it up 
     - examine its contents

      mentally swing
   from  limb  to   limb
        over reliant 
    on the gait cycle
        mistaking stagger 
  for momentum 

       I need only step back
join the dots
 scan the reference points
    mindful
  not 
    to 
   loop 
      infinity
  
      predictions may be on the nose 
   observations kept intense
         until curated
       should I care to unravel them

I regress
    regret 
       feel sorrow - 
    that every star-filled sky
           becomes a named constellation 

Inspired by Morning Star (L'étoile matinale) - Miro

Be true to thine self and shine



It is the lairiest of epochs

Ignore slop do a pop vox

Chock a block with shocks


But the scariest of tik toks

Snapping like hungry crocs

Another spate of hate docks


Photos that everyone clocks 

Those ones who girls mocks

Are as deadly as small pox


Aren't all as strong as an ox

Shaking from online knocks

Drowning in instasham lochs

Stinks like young men's socks


Mistaking that a cure’s botox

Crowning a theory I defrocks

That faking makes you a fox


Solution sells comes out a box

Lies stir fries in corporate woks

Smells fishy like out of date lox


Why jog cheat the elite flocks

Fatty injections vanity smocks

As the poor everything hocks

Pharma firm flogs all its stocks 


Not just peahens also peacocks

Androids on steroids rippled jocks

Muscle bound like the Springboks

Why are so many blokes.. cocks?


How about all go on a long detox

Take note your boat you’re the cox

Winner is the inner you which rocks

Fashion rations compassion is bollox!

A Casual Cruelty

God, I hate him.

I hate that i trusted him again, like my heart 
Forgot what my mind already knew.

I hate how i was so blinded, mistaking 
Empty promises for something that could
Finally last. 

I hate how he made betrayal look so casual 
Like breaking me was just another ordinary day.

I hate how he looked at me in the eyes and lied
Without shaking, while i loved him with 
Every single ounce of love I had left. 

With every ounce of trust 
I had left. 

I hate wondering what she had that i didnt
I hate the nights i convinced myself i just 
Needed to try harder. 

Most of all, i hate how he made me believe
It wasn't enough.

But maybe, I was never the one who wasn't 
Enough. 

Maybe the truth is, I gave my whole heart to 
Someone who never knew how to hold.

Premium Member Martin OM-45 Deluxe in the Corner

poems become
interchangeable

remove
the image

the poem
remains

when synapses
misfire
identity 
disperses

before death
arrives

when the hands
forget
the song

the Martin
OM-45 Deluxe

inscribed in spruce
and mother-of-pearl

the third fret
worn smooth
by G

an archive
of vanished
movements

most poems
observe

others collect
surfaces

fallen leaves
frozen ponds
abandoned chapels

secondhand
transcendence

rehearsed
astonishment

mistaking
recognition
for revelation

few descend

into
distressed
consciousness

where nothing
remains
clean

is messier

no idle
observations

consciousness
a spiral
of repitition

residue—

not the subject

only the
substitution

the mosquito
bite
of fungibility

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SEARCHING FOR ANSWERS WITHIN

I have learned that silence can sometimes feel like a room with no doors and yet some how still keep searching for meaning inside its shape Yearning for eternal rest not as an ending, but as forgetting the weight of being seen.
As I slip into the void of endless black, I do not fall so much as dissolve into thoughts I never said out loud.
 There are voices I still carry deep inside me Your acidic tongue drips venom, and I learned how words can bruise without even touching skin.
Still, I stayed longer than I should have, mistaking damage for depth, mistaking that longing for love.Love that seeps from curling words into a floundering bloodstream and I feel it even now how something tender can travel through pain and I still insist on surviving.
I do not know what  am becoming, only that I am no longer who I was when I began.
And maybe that is the quiet truth of it all to not escape, not arriving but continuing with everything still echoing inside me  Am drowning quietly

Sleeves and Tattoos

I wear my heart on my sleeve,

love too deep,

give too much of myself away.
But I wear the insults too
like tattoos etched beneath my skin,
words I never asked to keep.

I take things personally,
not because I'm fragile,
but because somewhere along the way
it was carved into my brain
that every broken thing in the room
must somehow be my fault.
So every criticism finds a home,
every rejection grows roots,
and every harsh word echoes longer
than it ever should.

I've spent years carrying
other people's anger in my pockets,
mistaking it for my own reflection.

A body covered in fingerprints
from hands that never stayed long enough
to see the bruises they left behind.

I love deeply.

But what nobody tells you
is that people who love deeply
often bleed deeply too.

And when you've spent years being told
you're the problem,
even your wounds start apologizing
for being there.

I wear my heart on my sleeve.

But the hardest thing I've ever done
 is learning that not every wound
 belongs to me.

Premium Member ACCIDENTS

Rain chased me indoors,  
into a café I’d never noticed  
tucked between two antique shops.  

A stranger waved me over~  
mistaking me for someone else~  
but smiling anyway.  

We talked until the storm passed,  
names exchanged like warm coins,  
and parted lighter than we arrived.  

Some accidents are invitations.

Gamblers Lament

Boredom shapes the  gambler’s curse—
a chafing itch burrows the skin,
and  promises of bounties full
draws loss and piteous  hunger in.

It wagers not on sense but need,
all wisdom choked at galloping speed-
that  trades frail  patience in a pulse,
mistaking want for feckless greed.

Tidal leaps the wave, a beast enraged
the shifting boards ,a sweep of losses tilt-
that stilts no longer shudderproof engaged
foundations fall and nothing left but guilt.

FREE WEEKS

Once every passing, in a pattern amidst thirty,
I offer my regret like a palm held open and empty,
The calendar knows before I do. It rattles in my bones.
My knees crumble like paper, vibrating and percussive.

Joy thins out quietly, anxiety knocks, but I never answer,
I apologize for the quiet weeks I called ordinary,
I’m sorry for mistaking mercy as a default.
I fold into myself and whisper promises upward.

In two weeks tops,
I will forget this pain.

And that will be the cruelest part.

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