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Broken perspectives

There is so little space I could give in my skies, Every moon has left a whole cluster of clouds full of lies, I cannot unclog a product polluted in disguise, Don’t ask me to lay in your web you chose to improvise , I have seen too many oceans being mistreated for wastelands, So don’t call yourself something that is drowning deep in quicksands, When you are surrounded with the wind and all it’s forgiving hands , Don’t disrupt my diligence by your Petty demands, Don’t even think about interrupting my silence , When all I could hear are traits of unforgiven violence , When all I did was extend some guidance , And all that lacked was to walk in patience , So let’s not speak of the truth , The truth which you failed to gift , To gift wrap in deceptions, Deceptions mistaking my kindness for trust , Trust lost in your idea of confusion, Confusion named as “issues” Issues engraved in broken perspectives, Perspectives from your cycle of imagination .

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Date: 3/20/2024 12:43:00 PM
He sounds like a loser. Hold out for someone who cherishes you more than he does himself. Nice poem dear Aura
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:50:00 AM
There is so little space I could give in my skies, Yessss!!! Me toooo… Every moon has left a whole cluster of clouds full of lies, damn rite dahlin!!! I cannot unclog a product polluted in disguise, exactly!!!! don’t call yourself something that is drowning deep in quicksands.. amen honey … ooo child u on fireeeeeeee!!! let’s not speak of the truth ,The truth which you failed to gift ,To gift wrap in deceptions, , mmmmm!!! Periodddddd! Every line in this piece made me snap my fingers louder!! Love this
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:37:00 AM
Ah my dahlin! I am loving this “loop poem” so well woven and delivered and so well crafted with such soulful emotions flowing in such eloquence: i always admire your rhyming skills and ability to convey thoughts without any filter or hiding behind big words or metaphors, which i wish i could do too: i especially resonated with “ So let’s not speak of the truth , The truth which you failed to gift , To gift wrap in deceptions, Deceptions mistaking my kindness for trust” powerful! Yes tell them
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