Long Astounded Poems

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Evils Are Rising

I was walking beneath the dimness of a misty night
With a cheerful mind full of optimism, “all is well”.
Myriad noises were hovering in hectic riots of light
Yet one mild voice made my silent conscience swell.

I was passing by so hurriedly while I abruptly heard
A grave utterance of an infant unto another, saying,
“Really, people of this world have become so bad”.
I became astounded by a kid’s deep understanding.

Cynicality has left a mark even in softest of bosom.
I wonder why an innocent child would remark thus
Though it had not met with reality, harsh, gruesome.
Or was it already a victim, like each enslaved mass?

Perhaps his tiny eyes too observed the human-fiend
That devours the weaker ones with their sharp teeth.
Raw power is hovering around the afflicted mankind
And camouflaging, many Evils are rising underneath.
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Form: Lyric


Premium Member I Do Not Speak Your Language

I do not speak your language I said to the ghost.
I speak a better one, fancier than yours, fancier than most.
I speak American, taken from English and hillbilly.
Your language is stuck up, decidedly silly.

The ghost was astounded, confounded, incensed.
Old English had served him well ‘til this fence.
What is American he asked, in a haughty, snobbish way.
I immediately thought “tea time” and decided to play.

Have you not heard of the Boston Tea Party?
It was the day we took over your ship, hale and hearty.
We threw all your tea in the sea, ignoring your taxes.
He ran for his wood shed, his chains and his axes.

He came back empty handed, for he was a ghost.
Could not pick up anything, a crumb, maybe, at most.
We decided to be friends, we talked into the night.
Me and the ghost, on my lap. What a sight!
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member What If

Biden has never felt weller
He’s seen off that crazy-haired fella
With boxes to dump
Of votes ticked for Trump
He simply can’t move in his cellar.

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Neil Armstrong had NASA to please
He slowly got down on his knees
He dug up a rock
And got quite a shock
And said ‘Yum... it really is cheese.’

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Pythagoras drove a big wedge
He said the world’s round with no ledge
Columbus was stressed
When in the Crow’s nest
He cried, ‘We've gone over the edge‘

           ***

That Alexander Graham Bell
At least as far as I can tell
His chisels he’d hone,
Carved a dog and a bone
Marconi had made one as well

           ***

Alexander Fleming earned his shilling
By working so hard and so willing
He ate mouldy bread
But before he was dead
He invented a pen with a quill in

           ***

Adam, it seems, had no mother
But God had sent Adam a lover
Eve, naked in bed
Was sad when he said
Hi ducks, have you got a brother?

           ***

The asteroid wouldn’t desist
It’s path wouldn’t turn, wouldn’t twist 
That fireball from space
flew by at a pace 
A caveman said f*ck me, it missed

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That covid was terribly cruel
It just wouldn't run out of fuel
We first sent rebukes
And then we sent nukes
When Xi Jinping said ‘April Fool’

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Isaac Newton is astounded
The apple has left him confounded
His half crazy stare
As it floats in mid air
Is strange for he’s always so grounded

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No seconds, no minutes, no hours,
A cosmos of dust and gas showers 
They’d clash and they’d clang 
To make a big bang...
Phut!
Form: Limerick

Spoken Word

I finally get it  not because of what I see but because of what I know
Ocean sea side waves of glory rays shine they glow
Boats sail shimmering sands counted but winds blow
To show 
To cover 
To minimize
To recognized 
Censored explicit scenes detected
I finally get I am protected
I am created built to last in this
Life given reason seasons change pain pushes me in this
I am broken to see true essence in this
Destiny awaken shaken grounds uncharted territory in this 
Give this time chance now has risen in this
I am glad astounded reminded of a spoken word in this
Before ancient had days
Pyramids were made
Space ships UFO trades
Columbus false gave
Timbuktu had shade
Music had a stage
Cakes had glaze
Harlem had a shake
In this before this I was made
Benefactor benefits pass before Steve Job passed away
Who would say who would be the next to pave
Waves of understanding Solomon's wisdom in his days
Would be passed on to say
Techniques had temples tipped by grace
Who would say 
In this I find peace this day
Revelation revealed a momentum of accuracy I must say!
In this I find rest in this
Sealed with love and with a kiss!

Premium Member Boyfriend Melts a Redneck Dad

Redneck dad was determined to not like his daughter’s beau.
He was from the other side of the bush, the money side.
His parents were probably stuck up and would look down on him.
He did not say anything, but he was determined to not like Jim.

Jim walked in carrying a twelve pack of Redneck Dad’s favorite beer.
For you, he said.
Redneck dad almost smiled, but not quite. He did say “thanks”.
His daughter gave him a harsh look.
Oh, great, she was taking HIS side already.
The guy said “I hear you collect comics.” He handed him a good one.

Redneck dad was starting to bluster now. He was astounded.
It was one he had been wanting but had never found.
He smiled. Take off your coat and stay awhile, son.
Jim took off his coat; his shirt said “I do dumb things.”
Not so far thought Redneck Dad.


Premium Member Greener

She stood there and slooshed on the grass at her feet
She’d have to move forward before she dared eat
She walked a few paces to discover that
Some other cow had left a foul splat

Wherever she looked there was piddle or poo
And that was the moment she knew what to do
She looked at the grass which was drying and brown
She might well have cringed but a cow cannot frown

She went to the river to drink some clean water 
Across it, the farmer, his wife and his daughter
Live in a house with a lush green lawn
The greenest she’d seen since the day she was born

But why should she settle for this frazzled field
When over the river, a bounteous yield 
Well she had to go where she had to go
And then in the water was hit by the flow

She struggled against it, her progress was slow
But she battled on to where green grass does grow
Why should the farmer keep it to himself
When cows were the subject of all of his wealth

The river was raging, the current was strong 
She aimed for the lawn so she didn't go wrong
And finally clambered the opposite side
Astounded she’d managed a river so wide

She pushed herself out and up onto the bank
And looked back across to where the grass stank
She’ll savour this green grass for all it is worth 
She took her first mouthful...
Yuk...
Astroturf!
Form: Rhyme

Free Verse Fever

Love is like a million stars 
in an ocean of celestial beings
Shining brighter than all others 
I am the moon whose evening pull 
reaches out to you beckoning to 
you in a seductive frequency no 
other can hear as it was 
meant for only you
Your brilliance begs me to pull you 
into me, cradling you 
It's with that aching aura that 
leaves me astounded
The attraction is beyond any 
reasoning.....
As if it's the perfect aria 
that every opera craves and dreams 
of being more beautiful 
than any other performed
That is the love we two share....


1/12/2020
Word used: astounded
(Yet also used all the other words)

Premium Member Awe With You

AWE WITH  YOU

I am amazed 
Filled with astonishment 
Surprised 
Filled with amazement 
   And I'm in awe with you
   Of all of the things you do
   I am  in awe with you, I am in awe with you

I'm astounded  startled 
Filled with wonder
Lost for words
Discomposed
None of this has to do with luck
Stunned thunderstruck 

   And I'm in awe with you
   Of all of the things you do
   I am  in awe with you, I am in awe with you

Unable to believe one's eyes and ears 
Wonder struck shaken up 
Taken aback flabbergasted
Dazed filled with awe
I was bewildered bemused
Flummoxed floored knocked for six 
Bowled over Lord God blown away 
Mercy me  I'm gobsmacked staggered
I'm in awe, in awe, in awe ahhhh... 
Lord God, I am  in awe with you

  And I'm in awe with you
   Of all of the things you do
   I am  in awe with you, I am in awe with you
 
3/21/18
   Written words by James Edward Lee Sr.©2018
Form: Lyric

Premium Member Behold the Lamb of God

Down in a little stable on what seemed an average morn,
Amid the sheep and cattle there, a little Lamb was born.
Destined to be a Savior to a world in frightful need.
Now laid within a manger where the livestock all would feed.

Behold the Lamb of God, come now to save us all from sin.
The One to fight the battle and from death our souls will win. 
Behold the little Child who will one day carry a cross.
The Shepherd we’ve been waiting for to save all who are lost.

The shepherds from the fields would come to bow before the Lamb,
Astounded to be witnessing their God come as a Man.
But they had heard the angels singing out in choral praise
To a Child in a manger. Truly wondrous are God’s ways!

A star so brightly shining several wisemen use as guide.
A long time will they journey just to kneel down at His side.
And bringing kingly gifts of frankincense and myrrh and gold
They give them to the little Lamb foretold by seers of old.

Now, look into your hearts whom He saved from death and sin.
And contemplate your living, do you try to follow Him?
Then take some time to think about this humble little Lamb
Who is the Lord of Glory now come down to us as Man.
Form: Rhyme

The jealous leper

There was a poor bloke once
inflicted with miserable leprosy
his story, the mind it stuns
but such was his jealousy!

One day some angels came to him
with mercy to heal his ailment
They inquired of his wish and whim
but were in for a shocking lament.!

The angels asked him as to whether
he wanted health restored, his disease healed
Replied the leper, 'he wanted neither
What he said hence, his jealousy revealed!

For he said, ''you needn't heal me, but instead
Inflict everyone else with my malady as well
let all of them lie loathed and deplored in bed,
as I've had to all these days like hell''!

The angels left astounded, simply returned to heaven
with neither healing him nor inflicting others
They still wonder from above the heavens seven
at how man envies his fellow brothers.

Ah, envy is a fire that consumes thee most,
Far better for humans if they coveted not
Why want ye, haunt ye another's fortune
like some covetous malevolent ghost?

Therefore why at all covet
You haven't right to it unless 
it was your right, or was snatched
A fit of jealousy might make you regret
and to hell you may be dispatched.!
Form: Quatrain

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