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Was privileged to have sedentary on the seashore in seraphic poetic submersion; the ringing sounds from the distant horizon made me entirely lost in my speculation; when the sounds of waves from far nimbly touched my ears to distraught me all of a sudden in collision! In that transcendental moment, astounded to find the ringing sound subliminal turns into the roaring waves in spinning motions, reminded me of my trivial existence in contrast to it’s immense vastness and mystical presence in connotation More and more it played with the sounds, the rhyming sea in enormity was stirring my inquisitiveness! The sea’s matchless rhythm appeared as the encompassing natures euphoria, not yet fathomed! The unchained melodies of the seagulls fluttering along with the tones were giving vent to its untiring assonance in motions. Everything including the sea beach creatures in perfect harmony were pacing in locomotion; there was absolute consonance in symmetry everything surrounded the sea, even a drifting wood, beyond my imagination; as they edified to be well versed with the cryptic connotations of the sea’s peerless rhythms’ notions! Their intense bonding with the sea’s rhyming couplets were their own, couldn’t touch the pens of interpretations. The sea with its salinity, deep currents and gigantic cycles is indeed s classic, a magnificent creation! Its rhythm so impactful that in a nutshell, in the seashell the whirling sounds rings in eulogy of its synchronisation! The ringing rhyming connotation reminded me ” when the calmness of the nature in rhythm are being agitated in various forms, emerges the abyssal cyclones and eruptions! “ The beach is not the sweep of sand, but a perennial testimony of the rise and fall of human civilizations. Even the beach pours the rhythm when the sea rings in motion, although inaudible in intonation, Paradoxical, even the upper end of the river yearns to submerge in it in complete conviction! At night, the incessant rhyming upheavals of tidal ebb and flow in presence of the magnificent moon, by taking shore’s consent rhymes with the enormous creation in arcane melodic union! Is there anything more alluring than the way the sea refuses to stop caressing the shoreline even in dejection? No matter how many times the shore sent it back, an unparalleled epochal epitome of unconditional outright selfless devotion! I brought shore kissed empty shells and a drifted wood while bidding adieu to the mystic motion as a mementos of the momentum of the exquisite memories of the sea to linger on! The ringing sea who spoke to my soul even long after my footprints in the sand were gone! Heard and that day witnessed with bare eyes,” the sea gives back whatever dear we lost, The lost precious moments, the platonic healing sight of dedication, self-beings in refined forms,” That’s the ringing sea, where the castles made of sand fell to intermingle to set it free to loose its entity to none! © Silpika Kalita

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Date: 5/10/2022 1:32:00 AM
As ever, I love the way that you use words - the imagery begs to be unraveled and thus engages the reader. Lx
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SILPIKA KALITA
Date: 5/16/2022 3:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Lee
Date: 4/27/2022 9:40:00 PM
Oh so rich in poetic rhetoric, a well deserved POTD. In fact stunning is how i feel about the poem.
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Date: 4/28/2022 1:40:00 AM
Thank you much Harry for your stunning compliment
Date: 4/27/2022 10:03:00 AM
Silpika, my dear talented friend, another one of your gems and deservedly selected to be honored with by POTD. Love this line -' Is there anything more alluring than the way the sea refuses to stop caressing the shoreline even in dejection? 'Brilliant poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/27/2022 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Jennifer for your splendid review and wishing.. Love, hugs
Date: 4/27/2022 9:43:00 AM
Silpika, your musings on the sea's rhythms, sounds, and tides are a delight to read and ponder. Your metaphors of the human condition are deep and worthy of meditation. I hope you enjoyed your POTD acknowledgement for these sublime thoughts. Warm wishes ~ John
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Date: 4/27/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you much John for your great feedback and for wishing. ..warm regards and greetings
Date: 4/26/2022 7:44:00 PM
"Even after my footprints in the sand were gone, the sea spoke to my soul." Such a powerful statement. So tender and moving, all at the same time. The sea *is* magical in many ways. Congratulations Silpika, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:06:00 PM
Thank you much for your kind compliment and wishing... blessings and hugs
Date: 4/26/2022 7:41:00 PM
Overwhelming sense of nature's movement, undeterred by man's proclamation of 'climate change' brings a sense of abject minimalism in the beautiful wave of time and nature! Bravo Silpika! And thank you for your visits!
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:04:00 PM
Thank you much Marshall for your wonderful analytical feedback and for wishing... greetings
Date: 4/26/2022 7:01:00 PM
Amazing congratulations ????
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:05:00 PM
Thank you much Richard.. greetings have a blessed day
Date: 4/26/2022 4:47:00 PM
what a terrific and intense poem. My favorite lines were: Is there anything more alluring than the way the sea refuses to stop caressing the shoreline even in dejection? No matter how many times the shore sent it back, an unparalleled epochal epitome of unconditional outright selfless devotion! Well done...congrats!
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Date: 4/26/2022 5:26:00 PM
Ample thanks for the wonderful feedback and wishing.. gratitude
Date: 4/26/2022 3:58:00 PM
“At night, the incessant rhyming upheavals of tidal ebb and flow in presence of the magnificent moon,” Marvelous lines in tune with nature Silpika. Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored with POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/26/2022 5:25:00 PM
Thank you much for your splendid review and the blessings... gratitude
Date: 4/26/2022 10:02:00 AM
Its rhythm so impactful that in a nutshell, in the seashell the whirling sounds rings in eulogy of its synchronisation! The sea and its mysteries, we marvel! Nice one!
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Date: 4/26/2022 10:08:00 AM
Thanks dear Kim for the splendid review and for wishing.
Date: 4/26/2022 9:43:00 AM
Such a beautiful piece penned so excellently Silpika, with great imagery and insightfulness too. Congratulations on being the POTD, take care, Gordon
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Date: 4/26/2022 10:07:00 AM
Thank you much for the great feedback and for wishing.
Date: 4/26/2022 9:05:00 AM
This superbly made poem brings the magic of her involvement with mother sea to a deep level of personal expression, as this poetess trawls all aspects of her involvement with our most potent supporter in nature. The rhythm of her beautiful language echoes that of those cosmic ocean waves that brought us life. Big respect for your POTD Silpika.
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thank you much for such analytical wonderful feedback and of course for the wish... regards Silpika
Date: 4/26/2022 8:39:00 AM
Amazing write,Silpika,imagery and feeling all moving. Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thank you much for your amazing feedback and the wish
Date: 4/26/2022 8:07:00 AM
Your use of images of the ocean was like an edifice, an edification for us as humans to see parallels with aspects of life. Breathtaking illustrations of life dramas through the interactions of ocean and land. There is much to be learned from the word of this eloquent poem. Thanks for sharing in such a poetic way. Congratulations on your honor of POTD. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thank you much Bill for such wonderful feedback ,and also for the wish, honoured by your review.. greetings
Date: 4/26/2022 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! The sea, an integral part of the life force! Very nicely articulated. :)Paulette
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:07:00 AM
Thank you much for the blessed wish. Nice to hear from you
Date: 4/26/2022 7:50:00 AM
Very expressive and articulated. The design and narration are of very high standards. An eloquent writing deserves highest acclaim.
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:05:00 AM
Thank you for the applaud , honoured by your words
Date: 4/26/2022 7:33:00 AM
When 'the sea caresses the shoreline,' 'my footprints never leave the sand!' Beautifully penned, Silpika! And congrats on POTD. Joy and Illumination, Gershon
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Date: 4/26/2022 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Gershon for the compliment and the blissful wish... Silpika
Date: 4/26/2022 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Beautiful" write. Love your line, "The ringing sea who spoke to my soul even long after my footprints in the sand were gone!" So True. I love and miss the sea/beach. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 4/26/2022 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Paula for sharing your liking for the sea and for the lovely wish.
Date: 4/26/2022 5:58:00 AM
Silpika, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance
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Date: 4/26/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance for the compliment and wishing.
Date: 4/26/2022 4:35:00 AM
"reminded me of my trivial existence", "encompassing natures euphoria, not yet fathomed" - Many beautiful revaluations through the ringing sea. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/26/2022 5:31:00 AM
Thank you much Alex for the compliment and the wish.
Date: 4/26/2022 1:50:00 AM
A beautifully written personification Silpika, well deserving of the honour of POTD, congratulations. Tom
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Date: 4/26/2022 3:01:00 AM
Thank you much Tom for the great feedback and the wish
Date: 4/25/2022 8:57:00 PM
This is an intense and incredible poem SILPIKA, it is awesome. The ocean, the waves, the sand, the eternal rhythm, ebb and flow simply drew me in as I read your wonderful words. I lived by the Pacific Ocean as a child, and the seagulls, the scent of the salty air was so beautiful to me, such joy! Thank you, for bringing my heart and consciousness back to a beautiful time in my life. I haven't been to the ocean in years. I enjoyed a visit from it today, through your poem. You brought it to me <3
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Date: 4/25/2022 11:34:00 PM
Thank you much for such wonderful feedback. So much in detail, thank you for sharing those golden moments and obviously for the accolade.... Thank you
Date: 4/25/2022 7:02:00 PM
"Is there anything more alluring than the way the sea refuses to stop caressing the shoreline even in dejection? No matter how many times the shore sent it back, an unparalleled epochal epitome of unconditional outright selfless devotion!" Your whole poem is a treat to the eyes and ears, but I love the above quoted lines the most ! Its ringing, rhythmic movement appeals to the poet in myriad ways. A wonderful read Silpika .
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Date: 4/25/2022 11:32:00 PM
Thank you dear Valsa, your beautiful words never fail to encourage... Hugs
Date: 4/25/2022 12:03:00 PM
Your poem is both beautiful and memorable, Silpika. Your descriptions and images are so pleasing. Thank you for sharing this gem. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 4/25/2022 12:41:00 PM
Thank you much Evelyn for the compliment and also for the blessings
Date: 4/24/2022 10:55:00 PM
When the sea is calm, it's the loveliest thing on earth. When it's slightly in motion, it rings with melodies untold. But the gulls spell storms. When all is said and done our footprints are obliterated. What splendid imagery you wrote. Well done.
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Date: 4/25/2022 2:41:00 AM
Thanks Victor for your encouraging feedbacks and the compliments. .. Silpika
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