Inadequate Poems | Examples


Shadow vs Self

What makes me not enough?
It seems I make others happy.
Why is the exception myself?
I champion my successes,
I recognize my strengths,
but inadequate I feel.

When the walls whisper
their song of the self,
it’s not a ballad of awe.
I hear a crooning wail
recount my misgivings,
left begging to forget.

As rational as I can be, 
this childish ignorance 
grips me tightly.
Despite being mindful,
I seem incapable
of ceasing these thoughts. 

Life’s many shackles 
bind me to the past,
left to tend to skeletons.
Longing for another chance,
desperate to change fate,
disappointed all the same.

Inadequate Father

Father whose lone son
He Leaves in Harsh Sun,
Son moving clockwise
Soon turns the street wise 

Dad whose daughter's skin
He pricks with old pin. 
And her secure wall
Blasts for a strange fall!

A dad shan't his head
Clean of what it'd read!
That which he's obtained
Needs he well retained, 
Common sense maintained, 
No nonsense contained...

Inadequate father
Still can go much farther;
It should be smiles rather,
As he climbs his ladder;


To An Inadequate Father

Don’t your daughter’s skin
Attack with a pin
Nor her blushing wall
Hit for an amusing fall…

And don’t your vibrant son
Leave in improvident sun:
Now playfully moving clockwise
If he ventures out, that’s streetwise!

Perhaps, you’ve your Good Head
Forced to forget what you’d read:
For what a bloke has succeeded to obtain
He should at all costs guardedly retain.

Trample Inadequate Example

Trample Inadequate Example

all we should trample
none were perfect example
due to poor sample

Jim Horn

Premium Member An Inadequate Poem For You

To say you are my everything
Does not capture anything

To say you fill my every need
Does not tell all that you exceed

To say you satisfy me with pleasure
Does not explain a  joy beyond measure

To say your beauty is magnetic
Does not describe feelings so poetic


Inadequate Inaccuracy

inadequate inaccuracy
never hit the mark 
no matter practice 
no matter efforts made
just a hair off the goal line 
just out of range of the target 
never able to get a clear shot 
something always got in the way 
of the vantage point from which 
the target should have been visible

Premium Member 'inadequate'

When the real you
Is not good enough 
When you weighed by a stranger’s scale
And you are labeled inadequate
Do you try and become 
Who they think you are 
Or do you walk around under the blanket 
Of not being good enough forever

Even when you know you are passable 

Do you pretend it doesn't hurt? 
That being judged by strangers 
Is just one of lives’ curves?  

When they trot on who you are 
As if you are irrelevant 
Do you tremble in confusion? 
Or turn a blind eye?

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Inadequate

Human nature is such
All you need is much 
Whatever you have is less 
You always stay in a mess.

Content are few
Not in search of something new
Values are not valuable enough
To assess the available stuff

Love is inadequate 
So are the feelings.
Words are inadequate, 
So is the meaning.

Inadequate is normal now
Sufficient will lead to a 'wow'
Its wise to find sufficiency 
In all sorts of inadequacy.

Contentment cannot be bought
It comes from within the heart.
It is a form of acceptance, 
Without any reluctance.

It is a sign of maturity, 
That overlooks all scarcity.
It's not the end of life , 
It's the glimpse of a new light.

Inadequate Tool

I feel the familiar burn of abandonment
A feeling that anyone sane would resent
And yet I bask in it—the disconcerted lament

Angrily I tear at the seas and weeds of lies
Saying nothing but curses—bidding goodbyes
Painstakingly waiting for the cruel waters to rise

But you never rose, you fool!
You graded me into your gruel
An inadequate tool—yes, a screwed up tool!

Here I am again and no one has won
Feeding on the nothingness you willingly spawn
Nothing but GONE—who the hell won!?

I thought you were a journey’s rest!
But you are nothing but a wrong-turned address
Spilling me over in a bloody, dead mess

I want to turn away tonight
And never look your direction
Because no matter how hard, I cannot fight
The seas of succulent depression!

You were fixed
At the expense of my misery
At the expense of an inadequate tool

The Inadequate Poet

I’ve got a little secret, on which I would like to let you in,
But first, please promise me you won’t think I’m full of mortal sin.

I’ve always had a slight dislike for poems that rhyme,
I scoff when I read them, saying their simplicity is a crime.

But now I must let you in on another little tidbit,
Something I’ve been scared to ever admit.

The dirty, nasty, naked truth about myself and poems that rhyme,
Is that I scoff only because I have yet to master their art in my lifetime.

I’m rhyme challenged perhaps, struggling with each word,
Coming up with combinations and phrases that are absurd.

One day, my pen and I hope to master the rhyming art,
But for now, I’ll just let free verse flow from my pen, mind, and heart.

Woefully Inadequate

After the holy battled moved,

the Angels staggered onward,

climbing mountains that had looked immense

only a few days ago,

stars darkened and streams of blood would flow.

No matter how mighty the fight,

and how dark the night,

God knew that the human army couldn’t protect his Kingdom alone,

battles fought, with honor and with grace,

death and hunger these humans would face,

God sent more Angels when he heard frightened voices,

putting their lives down,

blood everywhere, blanketing the ground.

They needed God’s help in any shape,

because they looked woefully inadequate to continue the fight,

the humans seemed relieved to have been joined by more Angels,

offering light to the night,

and feeling the warmth from God’s love

as the white wings filled the skies above.

The Inadequate Word

Twisted in eddies through whirlpools of living
we are experimentalists with emotions of affection 
as vocabulary of language cannot denote- 
for measures in words are profoundly inadequate   
for two spirits forged in the crucible of souls
tempered in moments by breath of existence.
 For no voice had nor thoughts expressed
      what heart has heard as love’s guest.

Inadequate Words

Let me depart
This play with words,
And enter
Sounds of nothing.
An earthen urn
Echoes river music,
Flows with the current,
To the inevitable dialectic
Of whirlpool sounds.
Let the river churn my blood,
Permeate through osmotic skin,
Until bed sheets lie crumpled,
Keyboards are shattered.
In the autumn of night
A white page stares at me,
I beat my breasts
Like an agitated gorilla
Ululating his mating call.

Hillsides reverberate
With urgent madness,
That is the message
In it all.

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