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Inadequate Inaccuracy

inadequate inaccuracy never hit the mark no matter practice no matter efforts made just a hair off the goal line just out of range of the target never able to get a clear shot something always got in the way of the vantage point from which the target should have been visible

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Date: 8/23/2017 12:56:00 PM
Inaccuracy is always inadequate so the word inadequate is not necessary here. Try to be concise when writing poetry like this. The rest of the poem is not bad and works to some levels. Thanks for it! Luis Estable
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