Foil Poems | Examples

To foil peering moon’s prying eyes

Oft resting under wooded trees
Roams she, hides head behind bent knees,
Adjusts her scant bosom rag, tries
To foil peering moon’s prying eyes.  
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Translation (quatrain) | 30.08.2025 | woman, moon
Note: Here is a verse (in Upajati meter) from Bhartrihari’s Shringaara Shatakam (hundred verses on love and romance). A woman is separated from her husband and roams looking for him, hiding in shadows of woods, adjusting her meagre bosom cloth, sparing it as if from peering moon’s prying eyes. Here is the transliteration of the Sanskrit verse:

Vishramya vishramya vana-drumaanaam
Chaayaasu tanvi vichachaar kaachit |
Stana-uttareeyena karot dhrtena 
Nivaarayanti shashinah mayookhaan || 56 ||
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member she would look sassy in foil

Lotta would look cute in a box of crackers, his grandmother said.
She would look sassy in a roll of aluminum foil, said Uncle Ned.
Lotta’s assignment at school was to fashion a dress from the kitchen.
Unique, made of items that are usually discarded, her mother was ’n.

They were talking about the girl who dated their grandson Grips.
She ended up wearing a dress made of bags of potato chips.
Grandma had helped her design it, and frankly she looked rather cool.
This dress took the top prize that was given for this category in school.
Form: Rhyme


In My Left Armpit a Big Boll

In my left armpit  a big boll
That made me with anger boil…

Then, nurse began to water boil.
“Please, don’t touch it now: let it boil…”

“But not like breakfast tea I boil!”

I’d prayed fluid would spill on the soil
And had begun to like snakes coil
But her next move, I on that soil, 
With the planned help of a sir Doyle
Who made steadying me his toil…

Several attempts to escape foil…

Treating a boil could a day spoil;
Two friends in arguments embroil.
Form: Rhyme

Night's Foil

A serene evening
with a gentle star-filled sky,
ruined by your lie.
Form: Haiku

Talent Foil

tea seed sport
wick fry
orange can loop
Form: Haiku


Mr Tin Foil

Mr Tin Foil
He’s a tin foil hat type of guy 
Do you know of those? 
They wear tin foil hats 

To stop the authorities 
From reading their brain waves 
His report says he is a higher thinker 
Or some such turds and that imbeciles 

Think he’s insane due 
To their lack of understanding 
He’s a real fricking lunatic hahahaha

Premium Member Tin Foil Lizard

Shiny lizard climbing up my wall
attached with nail, without pain
stoic and unyielding
glowing so happily
excites me today
entertaining,
lizard shape
foiled
tin
Form: Nonet

Premium Member Tin Foil Hearts

On pensive planes of wraith-like existence,
Are stoic shadows feigning affection;
Crimson lips of withering consistence,
Have lost their craze for craving confection.

Tear-filling prisms tilling a rueing sphere,
Pathos prowling, pity's wild and roaming;
Reminisce wind-blown is tumbleweed drear,
Bathos like bramble bur clings in gloaming.

Tin foil hearts' echo sad droning down-beat,
Rose petal ballet two rust figurines;
Today's gray sleet does douse yesteryears' heat,
Apathy's ennui directing the scenes...

Love once aflare in fanfare marigold,
Lies now a wizened weed, dried and stone cold.


Susan Ashley
November 2, 2017
Form: Sonnet

Tin Foil Destiny


You are my favorite conspiracy
My curious heart wonders
what future secrets you have to tell
When I walk by, 
your friends all whisper:
Hush, hush ... here comes her baby!
Incubated thoughts nine months in the making,
infatuated womb of maybe on the swell
You had a shy delivery ... pregnant desires, no faking
It is real, this love you feel — 
every dream you had about me told you so
At a rendezvous designation,
delivered by a scented missive,
Fate was confirmed by the distant ringing of a church bell
We sat together holding hands,
with our backs against the wishing well
Intense ruminating eyes 
exchanged conspiracies of the heart
You removed my tin foil hat of shiny yearning,
and told me that 
hiding in plain view was the perfect disguise
When it comes to revealing whom you’re in love with,
don’t be afraid, you said:
Come embrace your tin foil destiny
Sitting at the back of my mind, on the top shelf,
just waiting ... waiting
for the unveiling 
of my illuminated aluminum destiny
Discovery of your liquid elixir of love
is the best heartsick medicine remedy
A perfect prescription 
for loneliness plots getting tin foiled

Nero's Foil

NERO’S FOIL

		There is a light reflected in my lover’s eyes,
		it is the candle that bounces with my every
		breath, we are so close.

		I stare at the flame and it becomes the fire
		that razed Rome and I am Nero with my
		violin only I can’t play the violin, it dangles

		From my hand like a useless appendage
		and the city will burn unaccompanied.
                I breathe to watch the flames dance.
		
                Then one strong gust and the light is out
		And I am left to fumble my way through
		the darkness to find her heart once more.

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Know
Love
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Hey you
Love
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Tin Foil Promises

Sweet anticipation, your heart 
in my hand,
Robed in shiny bits of blue,
Creamy milk and ignorance,
Promises, poetic and new. 
Heavenly cocoa whispers,
Enigma wrapped in a mystery.
Dreams and hopes and 
innocence,
To taste and share and see.
A smile, a kiss...heartfelt 
embrace,
Moments meant to last.
Yet sometimes a moment is 
nothing more,
Once it's gone and passed.
Lies, deceit and bittersweet,
One thing leads to ten.
What once was love and 
chocolate, 
That never should have been.
All the prose and sentiment,
Belief in love that's loyal,
Torn, tattered, crumpled up,
Like that little piece of blue tin 
foil.
Long forgiven but never 
forgotten,
Long since trashed and gone.
The love and chocolate, 
memories,
Of promises gone wrong.
Form: ABC

A Piece of Foil

She sits at home alone
  Quietly sinking in her comfort zone.
 Loneliness feeds her soul.
  The emptiness takes a toll.
No other way to go.
  She heads to the corner store.

A quick relief to fill that void
  Her love, lies in a piece of foil.
Just another hit, to face the day.
  Takes her to that, private getaway.
Brings her to higher heights
  No transportation needed, to take 
This flight.

Where she goes, nobody knows,
  She finds elated peace, 
to devine to Define.
 Trapped in a cruel body, thats just 
  Doing time.
Embodiment of her being, left behind

Slowly descending back to her destination.  
  Reality is not, her intention.
Comes back home, sitting alone,
  The door slowly opens.
"Honey im home"

Premium Member The Foil

A weakness wound its wicked way inside
where thoughts of “us”, not love, do dwell and swell,
and formed a nest of twigs to stay the tide
yet cresting waves of righteousness rebelled.

“Stray not,” he said " for look on how I writhe."
Of fire formed made thane to only He.
Yet, man, of mud and clay did breach my pride
for Love of Thee, caste out the likes of me.

Now, Lucifer’s red flame so bright, burns night,
a warning scent to frailer souls, “Don’t fall.”
For even stars misstep, disgrace, pride’s plight,                                           
let his torment be your clarion call.

In light, act right, rise high in good spirit
and say “God, the devil made me do it.”
Form: Sonnet

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