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The Foil

A weakness wound its wicked way inside where thoughts of “us”, not love, do dwell and swell, and formed a nest of twigs to stay the tide yet cresting waves of righteousness rebelled. “Stray not,” he said " for look on how I writhe." Of fire formed made thane to only He. Yet, man, of mud and clay did breach my pride for Love of Thee, caste out the likes of me. Now, Lucifer’s red flame so bright, burns night, a warning scent to frailer souls, “Don’t fall.” For even stars misstep, disgrace, pride’s plight, let his torment be your clarion call. In light, act right, rise high in good spirit and say “God, the devil made me do it.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/24/2010 2:22:00 PM
What the devil made me do WAS be good for I did not wish to share the fate he was given.
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Date: 10/24/2010 12:08:00 PM
Well written verse Deb, but don't think it will work, smile! "last line!" Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/12/2010 3:20:00 PM
Now I so appreciate your reading my poetry today but u must go have a gander at my new blog with the Halloween photo of the costume entry I made and wore ... for Irma..luv.. let me know ..read it and see .. u cannot see the black feather wings with 'angel' in silver across the back..my handiwork.. and my pitchfork is behind Ron's wizard head..luv..haha..right where it should be.
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Date: 10/12/2010 3:19:00 PM
Now I so appreciate your reading my poetry today but u must go have a gander at my new blog with the Halloween photo of the costume entry I made and wore ... for Irma..luv.. let me know ..read it and see .. u cannot see the black feather wings with 'angel' in silver across the back..my handiwork.. and my pitchfork is behind Ron's wizard head..luv..haha..right where it should be.
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Date: 10/12/2010 3:17:00 PM
Hey I luv this one .. good luck with the contest .. but it reads like a winning poem to this pupil..luv... good luck.. I wrote so many devil poems forget which is which luv..haha.. tempted I think for Thvia.. devil or angel for Irma.. Paula got one too but damn if I can recall the title now.. other than its pretty good..luv..
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Date: 10/12/2010 1:49:00 PM
good write
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