Fizzed Poems | Examples

On the Rug

On the Rug with Death,
two beers in hand
(though no one here drinks)
we laugh, his lifespan
a joke still fizzed. My breath

ignites wars, lulls drivers
to sleep and builds bridges 
for his guests. What idle past-
-times you worship, he pitches,
eye wand’ring to traverse

the awkward silence as I
know what comes next. My
gauge on Man’s power dwindles.
Perhaps, he drawls, you might taste
something ever so slightly

more enlight’ning. His heavy
accent traces over the words, like
sugar on a sticky thumb post-binge.
Tongue in cheek, his fingers surpass
my laugh in wishing to be broken.

Ilheobeorin

I am lost in the dark again.
Can you help me find my way,
and the pieces that fell away
in my stupor?

First was brightness; it dimmed
Until, at last,
it fizzed out with no fanfare
and rolled down an empty drain.

Humour was next,
so bogged down by bitterness
that it didn’t land,
unceremoniously splattered on the road. 

Love was last, and it surely died
under the wheels of life.
Love is roadkill; salvageable,
but never the same again.

I am lost in the dark again.
Can you help me find my way?
And this time, get me out
into the safety of morning?

A Less Than Tragic Love

It was years ago
a lonely year.
a more clunky and mechanical age,
a dial-up decade.

He sent out needy signals.
Eventually a divorced lady from
Doncaster responded.

Sensual seeds were planted.
E-mails were exchanged
together with photographs
taken years earlier.

One day, not long after
a mutual disappointment
fizzed between them
like a dying fly.

Together they dialed-out.

Premium Member Sigrid's Sandbags

Braced to fight tough for triumph 
         Stockpiled testosterone
         Fizzed bicarb in her bloodstream 
         Sucked bitterness alone


         Flooded home, battle surmounted 
         Safeguard marshy roost
         Maladvised maveric trudged pond
         Stacking bags of no use

        
         Swirling water swarmed by spiders
         Fear erased from register
         Starless, deserted street industrial 
         Duty lead dim endeavour 
         
     
         Depth defiantly rejected her efforts
         Scream's echoing ignorant
         Yelled "help" at selected emptiness 
         Six months pregnant Sigrid


         Fortfied ego, throat sore, exhausted 
         Dry in her fortress upstairs 
         Concede agitated bruises encumber
         Defences laid dull despairs 




          
                      31st March
          Dependence is not defeat

A Cosmology

It was a younger time,
a clunky age
a dial-up decade.

Not knowing why
or why he should not,
he sent out needy signals
into the vast unseen
seeking worlds
populated with only females.

Many were drawn into his orbit
many failed to respond.

Eventually a divorced lady from
the fabled city of Doncaster
seemed willing
to be drawn into his net.

Sensual seeds were planted
in a garden they both watered.

It was love; it was true.

By an enveloped voyaging
they exchanged
photographs taken years earlier.

For hours, a muted
disappointment fizzed and spun
around a digital cosmos;

both grew distant,
together they dialed-out,
sending new rockets of desire

unto more invisible
yet detectable applicants.

Lovers, Lying In a Meadow

The air, sedate as vacant
This, hot enfolds
Buzz-fizzed, to a blue distance
Blooming romance?

Count as many eyes, delving
The daisy-faced!
Admirers, all, for the bee!
We, in love see.

They Met At Micky's Liquor Store

It was kind of late,
the town had gone to sleep
while some had woke up real early.

Nothing bustled, nothing moved quickly,
the moon had faded into a dark graveyard.
Micky's was open,
blue and yellow neon
fizzed static in the dewy dark.

She was not young
but she looked good in cowboy boots.
He had not shaved
but he looked almost sober
in his stained denim shirt.

They both held a bottle of JD
at the cash-out counter.
However, cupid was out of luck
for they wanted a drink
more than each other.

Still and all,
they would meet again
under a new sleepwalking star,

both holding handcuffed hands,
drunk at the back
of a cops patrol car.

Premium Member Expectation Feud

I waited, anticipated
Hopes were high, bloated
It was too much to ask, inflated
I lowered my sights, deflated
Tried not to be hurt, shielded
Numbed my senses, phlegmatic
Checked the date and time, could be wrong
I fought back and forth, sparred
Willed a lunge, parry, riposte, touché
But, when it came, it fizzed
The expectation feud, 
blew out the candles.

Premium Member Champagne

We have scarce put our lips 
to a drink of sparkle,
through years of wishes that 
fizzed, only to fizzle.

No cork missile has exclaimed 
into our ceiling’s muted white,
trailing bottled-up yearnings
a triumph has given flight.

Rarely has a foam-clad genie
danced high with a splash of hair,
sprung by a sudden silver lining     
from her golden-necked lair. 

But why should we not toast
so many years of quiet bliss,
anoint so much unsung labor 
with the frisky nectar’s kiss?
   
Why should our small victories
not be awash in shiny amber,
when we’ve held fast to purpose 
against darkest days’ temper?

Why, my dear, do we mourn
lost plots of grander scope,
but not raise high the twinkles   
to the courage of saner hope?

Before this life we’ve shared 
joins yesterday’s relics, 
let’s drink till we’re tipsy to
our ordinary heroics.

Premium Member Mammoth Drift

Taken sideways, swept as a web strung spider
Sand sugar legged staggered specimen lured by weightless
            Drifters soon to be lifted by unruly tide's violent 
Fears ditched for the squall enthrall of ocean fizzed caress

           Bolstered by booming blue brew, cork floated
Swell surmounts without pattern or rationale, contankerous
          Bobbed from below, five foot heads promoted
Bounced jack in boxes sprung from rolling realm rapturous  

             By tide's untimed tumult, sea steamed unite
 Sapphire stew participants simmer, softening vegetables 
           Drawn to next wily wave, crest conquer delight 
 Drag of salt soaked slow motion moon cascade incredible

           Roaring turquoise rise, crumb humans crafted
Into toys at mercy of lapis lazuli, control's essential revoke
          Track formation, tremor with desirous laughter
Brought to cool commotion by compulsion utterly unspoke




26th September 
  -  For Ace -

No Control Sq

Far too gone, you see.
You just spilled my tea!
Its bad tea, not par
See? You gone too far..

This is it now!
Ready for the plow?
I'm starting to fizz.
Now, it is this?

"Fist calm, now!"
 Claimed outloud.
 No longer fizzed,
"Now calm, fist!"

Control the lies! Here, alone!
For such sins, just atone! 
If you wont pay toll
Alone, here lies control!

03/24/2019
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Premium Member The Reason I Knew Love At First Sight

For there was the place
Under an angelic moon sky
There was the face
Of love and at me it smiled

The evening did chill
The wind from the north
But eyes that burned life filled me with warmth

A smile for which to live, a smile for which to die.

For there was the moment
When a boy changed into a man
There was this electricity 
That fizzed at the touch of her hand

There was the love
That I knew was my life
Beauty beyond reason
My heart which was screaming

There was the reason
I knew love when she smiled
There was the reason
I knew love at first sight

To me she’s eternal
Everything wrong somehow became right

She is my reason
She is my life
She is the meaning
She is my wife.

Feminine Endings

We've worn out yet another Anno Domini. 
We're twelve months - if not wiser - surely older. 
You call it a relationship, this boulder 
which hangs about me like a Shi'ite's bomb, and he, 
at least, can choose his cut-off point. From shoulder 
to knee, I'm (still) more Goldie Hawn than Golda 
Meir, but we don't flow. We ooze. Like hominy 
grits, turgidly. But denser. Stodgier. Colder. 
Where once fizzed electricity, hums static. 
The best and worst of me is best termed "womanly" - 
irrational, irascible, erratic. 
I'm sure my verse is worse. Tot up each billable 
pretentious periphrastic polysyllable. 
But you? You're spenter, deader than Mitt Romney.

Flamenco Song

I wasn't ready for it when it hit. 
Pathetic, self-absorbed, wallowing in grief, 
plaiting the threads of self-disgust and wit, 
I toyed with tragic sonnets for relief. 

The night was hot. The cleft of Guadalin 
crammed air, weighed down with jasmine, hard to breathe, 
like musk in tall clay jars. I heard a skein 
of song. It rose. It swirled. It dipped and writhed. 

There, at my window, I was held, transfixed. 
It was the ancient song of blood and soil. 
That wailing voice was stinging, bitter - but was mixed 
with darker tremelos which fizzed and boiled, 

then sank again. It almost seemed the shock 
of that shrill voice, embodiment of pain, 
had stunned guitarist's hand. His rhythmic knock 
reminded me of coffins in the rain. 

Voluptuous and frightening at one time, 
mellifluous and jarring, fresh yet rotten, 
the music was both guttural and sublime: 
my puerile self-obsession was forgotten!

Premium Member Trembles and Thrills- For Contest

To ourselves alone both had the place
and we dropped to our knees face to face
so close our breath mingled
our nerves and skin tingled
no credit card would fit through the space

her eyes wide in anticipation
her chest heaved with such expectation
a look pleading, needy
my face just plain greedy
hand thrust down with no hesitation

layers torn off I fell back and stared
for this I had been quite unprepared
with reckless abandon
she just left my hand on
as the moment passed by that we shared

oh so gently her weight did she shift
leaning backwards to let my hand lift
as I fizzed from the thrill 
of the new hammer drill
she bought me Christmas day as a gift.

November 5th, 2015

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