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Exquisitely Serenaded

A blackbird
sings his 
songs of love 
exquisitely
serenading

Beguiled by
his love songs
she responds
coupling
new life 
created

Nesting
resting 
one by one 
slowly eggs 
will hatch

Nurturing 
feeding 
hungry brood
day and night 
search for food

Tired parents
await the day 
fledglings fledge
to find their way

circle of life
continues

and she 
his love 
cannot resist
love songs  
exquisitely 
serenaded

Written 14th May 2019

After the most gorgeous spring day, whilst out walking I heard a male blackbird singing his heart out... oh what joy!

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Yet these seconds brought exquisite joy
as I watched my young daughter playing with her toys
so peaceful she looked, yet tense too as she played
her concentration intense, she was in a world of her own.

Then rising she flings herself at me laughing with glee
as she babbled, her words not always too clear and mixed up
it is moments like these that set a mum's heart afire 
so special, each and everyone a jewel to forever treasure.

To watch her sleeping, her brow furled in sleep
little twitches as she dreams, her legs running 
seeing her turn up her nose as cautiously she tastes
then spoons it down with a delighted smile that I return.

"Park, Mummy, park", she demands running to the door
standing there waiting impatiently as I put on her coat
holding hands she skips alongside me giving the odd tug
running round playing on swings and seesawing with her friend

It is the small things in life that give most pleasure
and what is more enchanting than seeing your child have fun
watching them growing up exploring their small worlds
safe in the knowledge you are near as they stretch their horizons
Form: Verse


Premium Member Exquisitely Played

exquisitely played
by the master. . . . 
my heart-strings snapped
Form: Senryu

Exquisitely Neat Green Handwriting

Old country house rich colored rugs hot wind
Gallopping hair whipped wildly at his cheeks
Solid double doors  top of stairway  top coat
Mantlepiece  photographs  in ornate frames 
Small  white  dog  head  between  its  paws
China  tea perfect lawn afternoon ceremony
Bowler hat  spirited distinguished  manner 
Smile of  welcome, something  in  his eyes
She trusted his good manners + hospitality
Embraced  the shadowy play of candlelight
Scent of peppermint musk vanilla surprise!
Form: Verse

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