CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

I Live Zealously Breathless

"Being alone with Spirit lifts souls with gifts of joy for hearts and light for eyes." Poet

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Whether I am embracing joy or buried in strife,
Your presence has been clear to me all of my life.
Through all years, I have sought to feel You even more
so truth continuously cements firmer within my core.
Your closeness - my awareness ~ I live zealously breathless

Whenever I need and seek precious time alone with You,
I close my eyes so all of the world leaves my view.
Focusing on a tiny white spot grows an ethereal light.
I see and feel vibrations pulsed exquisitely bright.
Your closeness - my awareness ~ I live zealously breathless

Within my chest palpitates a genuine, stupendous high
unlike any intoxication to be felt on earth's side of sky.
It is no longer air that I breathe, but Your glory I inhale.
You lovingly wrap me serene in glimpses of divine detail.
Your closeness - my awareness ~ I live zealously breathless

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Unseeking Seeker June 9, 2025 at 6:42 PM Beautiful! You are indeed blessed, CayCay ~ let grace carry you on its ethereal wings!

Paula Goldsmith May 29, 2025 at 9:18 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful Rhyme write and quote again. Have a blessed day with your win.............

Ron VanHooser May 28, 2025 at 7:17 PM Beautiful CayCay! I can identify with every word, feel everything. Excellent! Thank you for sharing! Ron CayCay Godwin May 29, 2025 at 12:35 PM If I had been 'fishing' in my comment to you yesterday, I would have been blessed by hooking a fish of generous, fulfilling and validating portions. My muse and I are sated with gratitude from the gifts your words have given us. Another blessing is the feeling of sincerity in my 'fishes' colors. Thank you for all the above. Crossing paths seems not to have been an accident. Hugs ... CayCay

Paige Hind May 27, 2025 at 4:33 PM Breathtaking- wish I could be more in touch, lol- sometimes the world is sleepy and heavy and...gray :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2025 at 4:35 AM - Congratulations, hooray...one of my favorites :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2025 at 8:03 AM This is so beautiful. I envy you because this is an experience not familar to me. My mom was this way too. I think I was not born with a very spiritual nature and it saddens me. I believe in God and want to feel that passion that others feel. I think that is why I want a near death experience, just so I can know the beauty of God's light.

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 25, 2025 at 7:36 PM CayCay, your beautiful poem of devotion is so touching and inspiring. It's a fave for me. :) CayCay Godwin May 26, 2025 at 12:19 AM Oh, you did, you really, really did, I checked, you said and remembered, then you did it! I am jumping up and down while typing (can you imagine?) Mentally, I am while my poetry-self inhales a breath of validation. I thank you. You really, really did! CayCay

Oliver Mckeithan May 25, 2025 at 11:52 AM Wonderful poem CayCay. The rhyming is excellent and flows smoothly. Good luck in the contest CayCay Godwin May 25, 2025 at 12:01 PM Oh, hi, you came by, I was just at your place. THANK YOU for your uplifting comments, Oliver. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (did you notice I left comments on a few of your first postings?)

Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2025 at 10:37 AM What a wonderful Rhyme write and quote you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away......... CayCay Godwin May 25, 2025 at 10:44 AM Paula, your comments are appreciated! I'll come check out your entry. AND, today I actually am writing away. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Victor Buhagiar May 25, 2025 at 2:59 AM I am not very good at rhyme, you are though. I like your structure in this poem. It has that feel of a great poem.. You did extremely well, better than mine. Well done and best for a win. Poetry hugs returned. CayCay Godwin May 25, 2025 at 10:42 AM I embrace your comments. You CAN do rhyme and do a lot of the time, I've seen such and enjoyed same from you. I love your visits. More poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2025 at 2:15 AM - "I close my eyes so all of the world leaves my view" ... to make peace with body and soul ... to shut out the evil images of the world - A meaningful poem about life, which resonates with our personal experience, CayCay - Best wishes in the contest :) - (I have a Friday humor poem for you :) - hugs CayCay Godwin May 25, 2025 at 10:45 AM Me thinks you really, sincerely enjoyed my poem - I sense it from your words and value the feel. I'll be right over for my humor hit. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf May 24, 2025 at 9:51 PM Marvelous! A deeply felt write. Inspirational, gw CayCay Godwin May 25, 2025 at 12:02 AM I had very little to do with composing this, it bubbled up from deep within while I was contemplating what to do for the 'Breathless' contest. Other than grabbing pen and paper and pondering words that I liked paired with breathless for the repeated line, my muse or 'other' wrote it. With 6 words you completed the joy and delight I have for the write. Love ... CayCay