Car Park Poems | Examples

Grocery Woes

As so many shoppers
consistently doing all manner of wrong
fail to return their trolleys
from whence they came to where they belong
it really irks when I leave work
drive my hybrid to the supermarket
circle the car park for what seems hours
and can't find a place to park it
the question may seem odd to some
and yet I have to ask it
why don't those self-same lazy people
do to it what they'd do with a shopping basket

Blank episode

I was lost after a night out and
couldn't unlock the screen for directions

you walked to the pub you can't be far just
ease yourself over this railing and
slide down the wall so you can take a
short cut through the car park

cursing all the while but
I know the tube station's nearby
and it must still be open

pushing the On button over and over
swiping this way and that
screaming with rage at this useless device
####ing this and ####ing that

now this isn't the way to the station
and I hear her voice coming through:

- is that you, why did you call me? 
  are you in trouble?

still the screen is black

- yes I'm just a little lost

- you sound very scared, in fact
  it doesn't sound like you at all

Trapped, Sat, Shaking

I was so high I don't recall being high
I sat in the basement waiting to come down
I hung with a friend, hung with, who was that boy
We waited in the bar while he waited for the bus

I called my gran, my safeguard, she knew something was up
Something is wrong, something isnae quite right
I found out later she'd been dead since 1987

I was so high I crossed paths with myself
And couldnae tell which one to take back
Some say it was mushrooms, some say it was acid
Blu juice or lettuce were the other options

I lost a week there and then it was Saturday
Had no idea who to call or how to get home
There was no gran of course now there was no bus

Spent twilight in the car park trying to come down
Rehydrated but the water just made it all grow again


Premium Member The Shopping Trolley


Early morning 
and it is still dark.
An abandoned 
shopping trolley stands alone
in the centre of the car park.
I take pity and return it back
to its home and the company
of its own kind where it
rejoins the others 
in their long coitus line.

god and austerity

God and Austerity
The supermarket that calls itself Forum,
 has a bell tower, but now, in time of
 austerity, no one flocks to buy anything
 when its bells ring every hour.
Sunday, when I drove my wife to church
 the car park was full of vehicles
 the bells didn’t
 toll in vain; when I looked through
 the window people were singing hymns.
When time is good, god becomes distant
 But with economic times and threats
 of a new war is looming, people turn to
 an abstraction in time of an unsure future.
Mind, god looks after his flock, walking
 around the car park, I noticed most cars
 looked new, but if you have got it and want
 to keep it a prayer goes a long way.

The Red Lion

Apart from the worn stone-step
where drunks still topple,
or the hand-painted sign,
all has changed,
now a neon glow backlights a plasticized fascia,
all ‘local color’ painted over.

In the car park,
two frizzy blondes face off,
The smaller has plastic bangles,
she rattles like a Zulu warrior,
fingers stab through cusswords.
Youths shout
over the clomping-thump
of their car radios.

"I used to come here often"
I explain to my incredulous wife.

"Good times."


Premium Member personal services

after doors close    after hours    when scarlet neon flickers out    red-light nights fill voids of need    my body is a ripped flower    my throat tingles to the burn of vodka-fire    gleaning the gleaming water-washed street    for an answer to the latest outstanding bill    sadly grateful for the slightest footfall    twenty for oral    forty for full    car park dark    steam-heavy dark    not streetwalking but streetstaggering    in hollow-pod hell    anaemic-ashy and vodka-fumy amorphous shadows    loitering    on durex-dotted waste ground    in secret alleys    back to dank brick    or deep throating down on my knees    skirt around thighs    fingers come-pearled and slick    come quick    after doors close    after hours    when scarlet neon flickers out    cold glitter of streetlights    gleam of cold hard cash    cold kisses    colder touch    no eye contact    look away   the cold nothingness that we say

Knocking on Doors

Knocking on doors, people to meet,
house after house, street after street,
keeping going, day after day,
whatever polls or trolls might say,
there's not much time for resting feet.

Car park selfies, the meet and greet,
sharing stickers and printed sheets,
no time to waste, there’s no delay,
knocking on doors.

Sunshine, showers, rinse then repeat,
change is never an easy feat,
when the future is all in play,
but we’ll turn corners, come what may,
walking, talking, to win this seat,
knocking on doors.

Premium Member Deep C

It was a hot day, I was on my way back from Spar, carrying a bag of groceries. I walked past the lilac bushes in bloom, past the annex to the medical centre with its small car park, rounding my house. From the side of the old red-brick typography building I heard an incomprehensible sound, like a tuba from underwater, the sound was muffled, even and deep. I immediately identified a C minor chord. Prolonged, devoid of modulation, the sound lingered in space as I walked across the ramp past the lilac bushes. It was impossible to make out exactly what it sounded like. As if from behind, there was some tenor sound in the background, but it was so faint that I could barely hear it. No one sat on the benches at the entrance to the house. The sun-drenched ramp area, the faded walls of the house, the bright blue sky. I went up to my flat, and went out onto the balcony. From the balcony I could hear nothing, there was the dead silence of a summer day. It's evening now, I'm writing this worthless story, but I can't get over the fact that I couldn't identify the source of the sound or its purpose. The only thing I could make out was an evenly sustained, deep C minor chord.

Deep Breath In, Deeper Breath Out

Deep breath in,
Deeper breath out.
There are no crowds.
There is nobody.

Crowds are unavoidable:
The ebb and flow of busybodies
Moves with and against you
Like a cluster of active cells.

Deep breath in
Deeper breath out.
Picking skin, exposing pink flesh beneath,
Shakes that won't subside.

Desolate high streets that,
Once upon a time, flourished
With people as their bright green leaves,
Now fall barren and edging death.

Deep breath in,
Deeper breath out.
It's freer now. It's quieter now.
The shakes subside.

Watching dragon's breath billow out
In the middle of an empty car park,
Muttering and humming to oneself
Without fear of being noticed.

Deep breath in,
Deeper breath out.
It's unusual; we all do unusual things
When we feel free.

The nighttime that once seemed frightening
Is now an inviting presence
That envelopes your insecurities
And shadows them from the world.

Deep breath in,
Deeper breath our.
There are no crowds.
There is nobody.

Visiting a Friend

I'm glad I came to see you today,
since we last met, my life has been in a little disarray,
but there was something about the orange in the sky,
I couldn't help but think of you when I looked up high,

I was thinking about the fall when we made those crazy face pumpkins,
and how my heart quickened when your hand brushed my skin,
I was also thinking about those romantic picnics on the car park rooftop,
and how one night we were interrupted by a traffic cop,

they say absence makes the heart grow fonder,
but it's so hard when you're too far yonder,
so in the meantime I will visit you at this special place,
and in a sense we are face to face,

I don't mind doing all the talking,
and in my mind we're always somewhere walking,
you've got me crying again, telling me how I should be brave,
but I was going to cry anyway standing at your grave.

Discrimination

Someone recently said there was more discrimination
against blacks than Jews, travellers (gypsies) or the Irish;
for which an apology has been offered for all those lies,
an inacurate description for whom the beloved country cries.

The poor Jews who were driven from golden pillar to post,
what belongs to them, you wonder, maybe the holy ghost;
we should not berate 'the chosen people' on a green hill,
because they're still here, last time Hymie sharpened pencil.

The 'gypos'settled in my car park after a second coming,
from the south of France and God knows where in India;
I told my son - you don't want to spend the rest of your life
in a caravan do you? Cheaper but gradients may be steeper.

What have the poor Irish done - that's the problem - nothing,
no government - there must be better news that Mick could sing.

How I Miss You

How I Miss You

By calling you on weekend
By reading your favorite novel
By eating your admirable dessert
By watching your left behind tv series
By trying to sleep on your sofa
By roaming around your apartment block
By cleaning your ever dirty sunroof car
By drinking your remaining bottles of wine
By walking on your office car park hoping to see you
By visiting the regular cafe of your choice in evenings
By admiring your favorite actresses with my friends
By writing letters to you never to be posted
By checking my emails wishing one to be yours
By praying to god to let us meet again

Premium Member The Dingo Kid

Beware of the dingo and watch out for your goat,
he hates our current leader, but is unable to vote.
He’s been doing hard time for relations with a horse,
he finally escaped but then he was caught, of course.

Back to Yuma he will go in a red dress and cuffs,
sleeveless I might add as he huffs and puffs.
He’s pretty sneaky this dingo and he’s fond of our landscape,
if he catches wind of your sheep he might try to escape.

I pray Terry and Dave keep a close eye on this chap
the dingo is not picky about what he puts on his lap.
He’s a menace to ranchers and all animals in town,
even in the car park, on the low he is down.

The good folk in Milton Creek will surely watch for his return,
this dingo is full of disease and spreads a rash that will burn.
Don’t try to be a hero, if you hear him talking rough,
he’s been working his fingers and he was born keyboard tough.

Hicksville Part I

In my mind I'm a cowpoke
Glass of jack in my hand
Watching Texas Two step
To a Texas Swing Band.
I've got slim line Levi's jeans
And a black Stetson hat
and tooled leather boots
I'm a real cool cat.
There's no jingling spurs
Or pistols slapping leather
Just the sound of the couples
Dancing close together.

This place is Hicksville,
Any state, Western USA
The time is the present
The date is today.
No hitching rail of horses
Ears twitching in the breeze
Just a big concrete car park
Full of dusty SUVs.
As the last notes of swing
Slide down past my ears,
I open my eyes
And reality appears.

No glass of Jack
Just a mug of cold tea;
No roomful of dancers
Just lonely old me.
There'll come a time
But I don't know when
I'll close my eyes
And go back there again.
Slumped in my chair
I know I'll soon find
Hicksville, USA, filed
Bright and clear in my mind

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