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Best Immature Poems

Below are the all-time best Immature poems written by Poets on PoetrySoup. These top poems in list format are the best examples of immature poems written by PoetrySoup members


Premium Member Intertwined
No larger than a grain of rice,
her face is forming; mouth, a slice.
Her heart, a tube, begins to beat;
at one month, things are imprecise. 

An...

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© Jeff Kyser  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immature, life,
Form: Rubaiyat



Premium Member Another Chapter of Milton Creek
With pitchforks and torches they rode through the night,
their goal was Milton Creek, by dawns early light.
A surprise attack was what they had foreseen,
led by...

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Categories: immature, western,
Form: Rhyme
She Is Healed
She was once young and immature
Delicate to the touch, fragile to the core
Always trying her best, yet being bullied

And despite all the ugly hurtful things...

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Categories: immature, bullying,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Poetry Crimes
Little men making laws
Little men seeking flaws
Little men laughing at the meek
Little men weaker than wounded sheep

Oh little men, come ye here
I shall score and...

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Categories: immature, bird, children, hilarious,
Form: Light Verse
Premium Member The Dead Man and the Loud Hen
I shall delete my existence says the dead man
	No more do I breathe	
	No more shall I rant
	Although often I recant

I shall delete all my poems...

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Categories: immature, children, hilarious, muse,
Form: Light Verse



Premium Member The Silkworm's Birthday
"The Silkworm’s Birthday"





Mulberry leaves flutter in the breeze
Kookaburra brave Joker bluffs a sky blue breast 
Drops one feather for a quill, a song hidden in...

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Categories: immature, chicago, grandchild, imagery, love,
Form: Free verse
Heartless
I used to fear the storm, now I feel comfortable by the dark clouds
I feel alone even when in large crowds
Things that I used to...

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© Alex Duffy  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immature, deep, depression, emotions, growing
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Here Be Keys
Sabers of the light…calm and friendly in showing appreciation…exuberant energy to burn…New powerful self-defense…Energetic straight forward shooter…Logically love applies knowledge…inventive soft gently touch…Good physical desires…honest....

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Categories: immature, faith, inspiration, true love,
Form: Prose Poetry
Premium Member Where Do I Come From
From my mother's womb I yelled into the room,
mattress on the living room floor,
my bro I replaced as the youngest, his face
as he screamed and...

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© Viv Wigley  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immature, humor, life,
Form: Rhyme
Fresh Peaches
Broken fruit stacked forward, with
their tender lip-soft skins 
scuffed among her unspoiled sisters.

Lonely is the unripe peach
hoping to be chosen,
turning her sun side out, beckoning,...

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Categories: immature, food, hope, imagination,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Hashtags and Selfies
HASHTAGS AND SELFIES
This era of the ego,hashtags
and selfies..and me me me...
to the fore,impatience always
knocking on my door.
Instant this,instant that,self
congratulation,superficial self
expression..quickly,quickly..I've 
social media to explore.
Insecurity underlines...

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Categories: immature, satire,
Form: Verse
Little Corona
Little Corona
declared one day
"I will be the strongest,
most powerful I say !"

"I shall conquer the world,
and establish my reign.
The world in my hands,
never free again...

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Categories: immature, dark, death, evil, fear,
Form: Dramatic Verse
Premium Member Outcast
When one feels like an Outcast, one can over compensate
In ways that are extreme to try and change their fate.
This can make them do things...

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Categories: immature, encouraging, inspirational, wisdom,
Form: Rhyme
The Most Compelling Flower
I remember the time-freezing moment
When Lieutenant Dan made his peace
And opened the dimension of gratitude
The audience experiencing the quickening

I myself have come full circle
And found...

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© The Fringe  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immature, thank you
Form: Quatrain
Premium Member Refund, Please
You can take back my adulthood
          I don't want it anymore
     ...

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Categories: immature, age, childhood, old, wisdom,
Form: Quatrain

Book: Reflection on the Important Things