Puerility

Childlike wonder fades, 
In the mirror, time's soft theft. 
Hearts once light, now weigh, 
Dreams of youth, a distant breath, 
Wisdom's price, the joy it left.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:57 PM
This is everything a superb tanka should be. And I like them even better when they rhyme. A FAVE for me. Thanks, gw
Iannone  Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 11:32 PM
GW, thank you. Tanka are fun for me. Cheers, Don
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Hello Don, your poem reflects on the passage of time and the loss of innocence artistically. I loved the imagery of fading childlike wonder, and the weight of wisdom's price evoked a sense of nostalgia and melancholy. Your words capture the bittersweet essence of growing older and the inevitable transformation of youthful dreams. - Blessings, Daniel
Iannone  Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:52 AM
Daniel, thank you for your wonderful words. They mean a lot to me. Don
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