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A Fabulous Fun Footle Game of the Immature

GAME OF THE IMMATURE

I hog
the blog

I tease
with ease

not crude
but rude

they rile
I smile

how droll
to troll


31/3/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 6:13 AM
The title says it all...fun footle! Congrats!
Strand Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Yes indeed Kim ,thanks
Pett Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Great write Brian, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :))
Strand Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 4:54 AM
Thank you Roy ,have a good weekend
Y. Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Hi Brian, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Strand Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 4:55 AM
Thanks Alexis, have a good day
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 4:45 PM
A very topical poem Brian which made me smile. I am so glad we were able to sort out the glitch ... I think a troll was playing tricks on me when i came to try and judge the contest:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Strand Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Thanks Jan pls see my soupmail on on yr judging problem you encountered
Burch Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 1:00 AM
Bahahaha!! :) now that's a well written set of footles!! Well done Brian! Hugggs deb.
Strand Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 3:59 AM
You are too kind Deborah.Thanks
Vaso Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 6:37 PM
This is so good Brian, I could read 55 footles like this!!!
Strand Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 3:58 AM
Thank you Arthur,have a good day
Merryman Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Ha! Ha! This is great, Brian! Blessings, Kim
Strand Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Thanks Kim for your comments
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