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(3 Haikus) Immature - is a word boring people use to describe fun people I should start a book, a thick notebook to keep inappropriate thoughts Ever look at friends and think, "Wow, we're gonna be some weird adults?" Sleep is my drug, my bed is the dealer, my clock the cops and school the jail.

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Date: 9/1/2020 4:08:00 AM
Adorable and such a sweet adventure into poetry. Love it. God bless you
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Date: 9/1/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thank you =]
Date: 8/17/2020 9:39:00 PM
Anais, So captivating must say to come wondering in, see what springs like a fountain from heart to the pen. -Richard
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Date: 8/18/2020 5:27:00 AM
Thanks Richard =]
Date: 8/17/2020 8:26:00 PM
Yep, some day you will be a weird adult:) Love it!
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Date: 8/18/2020 5:26:00 AM
Yeah, probably =]
Date: 8/17/2020 7:33:00 PM
Very specific, poinant thoughts, delivered with humour. Sharp peripheral, Anais.
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Anais vionet
Date: 8/18/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thank you Sigrid =]
Date: 8/17/2020 5:27:00 PM
And adult is a word fun people use to describe boring people...may you and your friends always be a little weird and NEVER adult. Enjoyed your (3 haiku)? John
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Date: 8/18/2020 5:25:00 AM
Thank you John =] I say 3 Haiku because I broke the rules in the 4th stanza (too many syllables in the last line)
Date: 8/17/2020 2:14:00 PM
The best thing about school is that you will never see most of the students again! Aloha! Rico
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Anais vionet
Date: 8/17/2020 2:58:00 PM
That's true =] Thanks Rico!