Notes About The Poem

lets all just relax, ok? No pressure
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4 Random Thoughts

(3 Haikus)

Immature - is a
word boring people use to
describe fun people

I should start a book,
a thick notebook to keep
inappropriate thoughts

Ever look at friends
and think, "Wow, we're gonna 
be some weird adults?"

Sleep is my drug, my
bed is the dealer, my clock 
the cops and school the jail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hoffman Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Love the perspective here. The third haiku is delightful, Anais.
Vionet Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Thanks Franci. =]
Manchanda Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Nice.
Vionet Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thanks! =]
Mcintosh Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 4:08 AM
Adorable and such a sweet adventure into poetry. Love it. God bless you
Vionet Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Thank you =]
Theraven Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Anais, So captivating must say to come wondering in, see what springs like a fountain from heart to the pen. -Richard
Vionet Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 5:27 AM
Thanks Richard =]
DiMino Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Yep, some day you will be a weird adult:) Love it!
Vionet Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 5:26 AM
Yeah, probably =]
Ermine Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Very specific, poinant thoughts, delivered with humour. Sharp peripheral, Anais.
Vionet Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 5:26 AM
Thank you Sigrid =]
Gondolf Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:27 PM
And adult is a word fun people use to describe boring people...may you and your friends always be a little weird and NEVER adult. Enjoyed your (3 haiku)? John
Vionet Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Thank you John =] I say 3 Haiku because I broke the rules in the 4th stanza (too many syllables in the last line)
Leffanta Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 2:14 PM
The best thing about school is that you will never see most of the students again! Aloha! Rico
Vionet Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 2:58 PM
That's true =] Thanks Rico!
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