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Premium Member Meandering

One spring day meandering in a meadow,
I saw a butterfly whose beauty matched that
of May's azure sky.
With blue silken wings like that of a fairy,
she flitted here and there -
aimlessly as butterflies seem wont to do.
Oh, to be that butterfly,
alighting on any pretty flower whose scent delighted me -
unhurried and unworried.
I would be that butterfly breezing through the meadow
meandering . . . meandering . . .
to where – I did not know,
but soon I found myself beside a brook.

My heart became the song of blue bells
which danced with the wind beside the brooklet.
And as my little friend fluttered on,
I careened behind her with arms outstretched,
laughing as the long grasses through which I leaped
tickled the calves and shins of my legs.
Soon I was approaching a grove of tall green trees -
meandering . . . meandering.

I kept my eyes on the bright blue wings ahead of me.
Freely I flowed like the wind that swept through my hair
as it fluttered the leaves of the tall green trees
until suddenly – the butterfly 
was vanished from my view!
I knew not to where I’d wandered,
but in my heart I had no fear.
All things come to an end eventually,
but also all paths eventually lead
to somewhere.

Turning myself back toward the direction
from which I’d come
and with my arms spread wide,
I let the butterfly in me
take me eastward -
meandering . . meandering.

Premium Member Impressions From a Stone Skipped On Water

He grabbed me up from where I lay, peaceful in the sun, 
with my brothers and my sisters round about me. 
I felt four digits seeming to be one of a whole, 
which clasped around my form. 
A fifth one, slightly broader, pressed onto me from my other side. 
And then with a jolt, I found myself next lifted high into air, 
the dry hot bed beneath me but a whisper of my past.

Accustomed, at the most, to being trodden upon, 
I barely had the time to assimilate this rare experience 
(I seemed to remember a sweeter touch long ago from a smaller being who had picked me up, examined me and then placed me back on the ground).  
Suddenly, I was moving, this time unsupported, through the air.

I spied in a single spinning moment 
a world I’d not envisioned from the spot on earth 
I'd shared with pebble siblings. In that place, we were surrounded 
by greenery that blocked our view 
and by giant old gray boulders, my ancestors perhaps.  
Reposing heavily as if attached to land,
 one such silent sentry supported him, 
the creature who had flung me far from my home.

I found myself then bump, bump, bumping along, 
making little rings across a shiny stretch of blue.  
And when I lost momentum, 
I disappeared beneath the final circle I’d created.  
It felt much like the times I had been buried in cold whiteness, 
but this instead was liquid cool!  
I dropped down and down, 
onto a different kind of ground, unusually soft and sticky,
 the way earth used to feel for me after a sudden  downpour.  

Settled there, I noticed brown and silver shapes that flitted past above me, 
much smaller than many of the creatures of the land above me, but swifter.
Also there were tall green blades that swayed in place.
They resembled those that stood on solid ground.  
Best of all, I saw around me others of my kind; 
a multitude of us, small, beautiful and round, 
with whom to share my soft new cozy bed! 

June 25, 2017
Submitted Aug. 8, 2021 for the Stone Poetry contest of Anthony Biaanco

Premium Member Oblivious To Nature

It seemed like nature had concocted a singular miracle
As I sat on the wooden bench looking in towards the woodland.
A red maple tree stood tall surrounded by eucalyptus trees
While down below grew the yellow protea and acacia scrubland.

Sun filtered in between the green and red coloured full growing trees
Sending bright rays of light upon the lotus decorated lake,
Dragonflies flitted over flowers, as cicadas sang their song,
As a light south breeze ruffled the surface, what melodies they make.

Thus I sat amazed at the scenery so magical and bright,
Admiring all beauty God's creation that no man can design.
Meantime my daughter sat quietly next to me, mobile in hand,
Tapping messages away, heedless of the view as I did pine.
Form: Verse


Premium Member Valley’s Echo Singular Song

"In the echo of silence, the whispers of the Divine are heard."  By Rumi

I entered the winding path into the captivating vale
Surrounded by ice-capped mountains and ancient trees
Firs, larches, redwoods, spruce, and ash, all grand
I shouted in glee: “I’m here!” All around some Echo replied.

A repetitive Echo, always vibrating and mesmerising.
What a singular sound to hear nature at its best!
I lounged beneath the shade of an old maple tree,
Where the verdant vale lay sprawled in front of me.
Balmy breezes blew through dark green trees, an Echo divine.

Tiny thrushes flitted from bush to bush.  
They permeated the vale with their familiar songs.
Occasionally they rested on a dense bush,
Hush!  Did I hear the song again?
Choirs of echo resounded all around the lush plateau.

Down on the majestic plain, a babbling brook meandered
Towards a clump of cottages, providing water for all.
The rivulet was a sight with fronds of ferns unfolding.
How delightful to hear the water emanating such dulcet echo
As the stream zigzagged around rocks and small waterfalls.

Every echo ended in silence profound and I was in God’s peace.  
A holy hymn hummed serene:  echo after echo, all divine.


Placed 1
Form: Imagism

Satire Fun

Miss Muffet sat upon a velvet stool
I know 'twas a tuffet; learned that in school
But Muffy was the tart
Who broke the spider's heart
I'm telling the story, so shut up, fool!

Humpty Dumpty had no wisdom at all
That stupid raw egg sat upon a wall
Tempting luck, he gambled
Kerplunk...he got scrambled
Oh what dire fate for an egg to befall

Robbie Rabbit had a fly on his head
It flitted to his tongue where it fell dead
Robbie's halitosis
Was a bad neurosis
He was banished before allowed to spread

The scoop on gardener, Mary Mary
Is she liked to sip Bristol creme sherry
Her tummy was growing
Pregnancy was showing
The dad?  Tom, Dick, Harry; maybe Jerry

Jill followed Jack up that hill on a whim
She thought he was cheating on her with Kim
The buxom preacher's daughter
Jill was jailed for slaughter
She beat both of them with Jack's bloody limb

Such a bad little boy was Jack Horner
Spent many hours in the time out corner
Jack was dumber than dumb
Ate plum pie with his thumb
Wagged his purple tongue at each laughing scorner

There was a speedy racer, called the hare
He was so fast, thought he'd have time to spare
The tortoise whooped his butt
The hare shouted some smut
I won't repeat it. No way I'm going there!

I read the tale about Cinderella
Who went to a ball to snag a fella
Bippity boppity boo
She ran off and lost a shoe
And stepped in some sticky mozzarella

Hey, where are ya going, Baa Baa, black sheep
Leaving your meadow, Master, you're a creep
You sheared off my wool
Tired of your bull
I'm joining the herd of Little Bo Peep

Three oinkers built houses with diverse ideas
Straw and sticks? Those guys drank too many beers
The bad wolf huffed and puffed
Piggy three had him handcuffed
The bricker was much shrewder than his peers
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Don'T Quit Your Dream- POTD

Night stirred memories, once forgotten of the days 
I burnt in love when you consumed my days,
and I carried you like a queen in the palanquin of my thoughts!

without forethought, to elbow out the marauding of memories,
I set out, travelling miles, my heart throbbing in my chest
my legs shaking and trembling, finally reaching your hermitage

casting away my stilted pride, expectant and anxious,
I waited at your doorstep to seize the moment
to renew a commitment and knocked hopefully at your door.

while listening intent for the approaching footsteps
and the sound of the key turning on the latch
did I see a face peering through the window, and quickly withdraw?
was it the face I longed to see?

time skipped quickly by, hours flitted 
between limping dawns and staggering nights

how long had I waited there? Was it weeks, months, or years?

I knew roots had grown under my feet
and my body had vegetated into a tree

in Time’s eternal motion, the tree will remain there
as a trunk of fossilized dream till your love charges life into it!

Nov.24. 2022

~ Placed Second~

POEM OF THE DAY

Don’t Quit Your Daydream Poetry Contest
Sponsor -craig cornish

Dec.8.2022

2022, Marathon Mile.22. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Mark Toney


Premium Member A Lovely Little Daydream

A little daydream, like a butterfly
into my absent mind came fluttering,
in pink and blue pastel. Then to and fro,
it flitted as its wings began to grow.

Above those rainbow wings, I was sitting
as the giant butterfly went flitting
through a field of buttercups. We flew
then toward the sea which sparkled azure blue.

The flying marvel tilted, dropping me
into the crystal waters of the sea.
My body changed upon my daydream’s whim,
and I could breathe beneath the sea and swim.

A mermaid I’d become with hair so long.
I swam to shore and sang a siren’s song.
Sun sank! My lovely daydream slipped away
and left me on my beach towel where I lay.

Jan. 20, 2017
Form: Rhyme

I knew I would find it somewhere

~

I drifted past the sunset
where horizons make their place
Imaginary lineage 
that artists love to trace

I saw the world illumined
in a shade of tangerine
Beyond the treelined silhouette
and shadows in between

I scaled a distant mountain
that was massive in its size
Where I could taste the altitude
amidst blueberry skies

When then I saw a sparrow
as it flitted on the wing
And followed it, just listening
in hopes that it would sing

It took me down a pathway,
round the bend and every turn
Then rested in an olive tree
beside a river fern

I bid farewell and strolled along,
directions heading west
For this I hoped would lead me too
my early morning quest

A squirrel danced above me 
in the branches of the trees,
A firefly then floated by,
like surfing on the breeze

I watched in endless wonder
as the world about me turned
Took little notes in scribbled thoughts
of all that I had learned

When up ahead I see a spark,
a tiny orb of gold
As half a day had come and gone,
if every truth be told

It seems I've found my treasure,
there it sits before my eyes
The one thing I've been searching for,
a beautiful sunrise


Good morning, Soupers
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Abyss of Void

The seamless sky called life glowed with cloudless beauty,
on the rippling breeze flitted a butterfly free,
on its wings I painted lattice of my being.
Flowers of my meadow bloomed all seasons for me.

The dawning horizon splashed the spectrum of bliss,
on unfurled buds of dream I was on course to fly.
Euphoria took me to realm of fantasy,
I didn’t see storm clouds gather at the edge of sky.

Splintered in the flickering vive of tinged twilight,
in the vortex of spasm I saw my sky decay,
and crumbling with my dreams in the abyss of void.
In its dark depth I found the end of my pathway.

The flushing meadow turned to withering debris,
the destemmed flowers didn’t see new sunrise in spring.
Surge of summer rains carried away the petals,
the butterfly lost colors from its broken wings.

September 27, 2020
Syllable count : 12 each line
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Writing Challenge-Decay
Sponsor : Constance La France
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Whispering Wings

Whispering wings fluttering by -
purple and pink; orange and red.
Sapphire and green ones caught my eye
as they shimmered over my head.

Enchanted, I then ran behind
whispering wings fluttering by
and followed them, hoping to find
where they might go with twilight nigh.

Magically painting the sky,
they flitted too quickly away.
Whispering wings fluttering by
vanished into the waning day.

Beyond the horizon, then gone
like a dream was each butterfly -
a beautiful dream then withdrawn . . .
whispering wings fluttering by.

Jan. 12, 2022 
For A Strand (1074) Poetry Contest
Form: Quatern

Premium Member Distraction

I meant to do my work today
Instead I spied a nest among the maple leaves
 where birds were singing in the trees
   and others splashing soft brown wings 
                in the birdbath by the old porch swing

I meant to do my chores today
  But clear blue skies, a soft spring breeze
This cloudless day, and blooming trees...they filled me with distraction...

I had my rusty rake in hand, some ground to till
   a hedge to trim, some weeds to pull....but clouds above the rolling hills
                                                                                    all led me to distraction....

 A butterfly, all black and gold, flitted soon across the field
             And once again, it took my eyes yet further still...

The garden hose, curled sleeping by, in noon day sun, awaiting me
        instead I sigh, and 
           once again my wandering eye, 
                among tall grass, some bugs I spied, 
                            I must explore the whole outdoors before this lovely day has died

I hesitate, ....my chores can wait, 
                                it seems that fate says "Work can wait!!
                                                      Enjoy!! It says, this splendid day!! 

These  most worthy,  so pleasing, never bothersome, soul satisflying, quite heavenly 
                                                               
                                                  distractions !!


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Premium Member - Haiku X 90 - Heartbroken -

Random thoughts flitted
You were my whole foundation
And I was a fool









- howmanysyllables.com
  Haiku 5-7-5
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
  12.06.2016
- Copyright © All Rights Reserved


- Published in the newspaper 29.06.2016
Form: Haiku

Premium Member The Daisy

In my bed.
Winter blahs.
Colorless ground
Icy jaws.

I poke my head
Timidly forth.
I see some green
I feel some warmth.

I stretch my tendrils
Toward the sky.
Spindly spikes
Reaching high.

Slowly my body
Unclenches, unfurls
Displaying a wonder
Color and curls.

I dance in the breeze
In joyous abandon
I bow and I spin
Appearing quite random.

But when I pause
In the sunshine of life
I see the most wondrous
Sight of my life.

Right here, in my bed,
While I flitted, oblivious,
Was done a miracle
Not usually privy us.

For far as I looked
To my left and my right
My front and my back
In day and in night.

Fields of color
Pastel, neon, bright.
All posing and twisting
To find the best light.

I bow to their beauty
They bow back in kind
Diversity fills
My sight and my mind.

Some neighbors are dark
Some shorter, some tall
Some petals reach up
Some bend, swoop and fall.

Some dropped by a bird,
Some planted with love,
But all finding life
From the Source up above.

I'm thankful for color
In every direction.
I'm thankful for difference
Not boring reflection.

Joyful integration.
But more work ahead.
My neighbors and I
Hope to make our bed spread!

So take it from me
The humblest of flower
In difference is strength,
A rainbow has power!

Love is the key;
With light always sow.
And life will be fruitful,
Your kingdom will grow.





2nd place in theme #7 colors, judged  1/28/2016
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member This Docile Earth

This world, never ours alone, but shared with other creatures great and small.
The Earth turns and new dawn comes, and will long after we're gone.
A Sandpiper flitted along the shore and told me so.   

We must face a truth that we borrowed these days, you and I,
from benefactors and trustees, unborn and untested, yet will be.
I finally understand now, watching the selfless Caracal's practiced smile.. 
the tawny red bearded lion basks in the same sunshine.

Touch a heart, lift a soul will you? It's not too late. 
For I have faith we are mostly good.
Now listen to the song of nature, be kind..
and don't worry about what never would.
Form: Prose

A Lazy Day

Our jobs were all done yesterday,
Got up to a sunny morning today.
Breakfast done and dishes washed,
Another coffee and my comfy chair,
Just gazing about seeing what's there.
Azure blue sky and a gentle breeze,
All in place for a morning of ease.
Birds drink at the fountain I made,
They also drink at our water cascade.
Bees gathering nectar for their Queen,
All in the garden is quite serene.
Butterflies flutter by, cicadas chatter,
Pigeons in the Pine having a natter.
A large bright green lizard ambled across,
For all the world saying Hey I'm the boss.
Smaller ones flitted among the pots,
Prehistoric animals that time forgot.
And so the day passed in our Cyprus place,
A coffee, a book, our dogs in a lazy space.

© Dave Timperley 30 July 2017
Form: Rhyme

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