Meandering

One spring day meandering in a meadow,
I saw a butterfly whose beauty matched that
of May's azure sky.
With blue silken wings like that of a fairy,
she flitted here and there -
aimlessly as butterflies seem wont to do.
Oh, to be that butterfly,
alighting on any pretty flower whose scent delighted me -
unhurried and unworried.
I would be that butterfly breezing through the meadow
meandering . . . meandering . . .
to where – I did not know,
but soon I found myself beside a brook.

My heart became the song of blue bells
which danced with the wind beside the brooklet.
And as my little friend fluttered on,
I careened behind her with arms outstretched,
laughing as the long grasses through which I leaped
tickled the calves and shins of my legs.
Soon I was approaching a grove of tall green trees -
meandering . . . meandering.

I kept my eyes on the bright blue wings ahead of me.
Freely I flowed like the wind that swept through my hair
as it fluttered the leaves of the tall green trees
until suddenly – the butterfly 
was vanished from my view!
I knew not to where I’d wandered,
but in my heart I had no fear.
All things come to an end eventually,
but also all paths eventually lead
to somewhere.

Turning myself back toward the direction
from which I’d come
and with my arms spread wide,
I let the butterfly in me
take me eastward -
meandering . . meandering.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ashley Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 11:27 AM
Dear Andrea, it’s a pleasure to return and re-read this exceptional poem once again. Such an enchanting poetic meander with your butterfly guide until you then embraced the butterfly spirit inside. A lovely symbol of transformation. Congratulations for your success in Mark’s contest. I’m honored to share the podium with you. Your golden pen shines, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Crandall Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 8:03 PM
A nice story. Funny to think of it - a butterfly leading a human (in a meandering way). It sounds like a good tour.
George Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 10:39 PM
This poem sets a lovely mood. I enjoyed your carefree meandering as a beautiful butterfly through the air. Congratulations, Andrea on your great win.
Toney Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Andrea, a delightful poem with the joyful theme of “meandering . . meandering.” :) Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 8 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 9 has already started.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Thanks, Mark. It's so hard for me to know what to choose!
Godwin Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 8:14 PM
You made it!!! I did not despite what I considered an "endorsement". One never knows and neither do we two. Very happy for you, I believe we are tied again. CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Thanks, dear. We can only keep hoping and doing our best. Just know that I think all your entries are delightful.
Empress Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 11:28 PM
Wow this is beautiful!!! The detailed descriptive language and the way this flows is beyond impeccable! One worthy of all the accolades. I loved so many lines in this but especially “ my heart became the song of blue bells” and also “ unhurried and unworried. I would be that butterfly breezing through the meadow meandering . . . meandering . . .” Just stunning! A fave this is for me. Congratulations on your win
Ashley Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 8:15 PM
Dear Andrea, the magic of your golden pen had me “meandering” right there along with you, chasing the enchanting blue butterfly. I loved “my heart became the song of blue bells” - so delightful! A beautiful dreamy poem. Congratulations for your win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Jayasankar Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 3:56 AM
I remember reading this Ria... This is such an exquisite write from your magical ink that flows so well in free verse... Am so glad of your great placement with this and hearty congratulations sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
Gasun Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 7:10 AM
This is so fascinating my dear friend Andrea! I love it and goes to my fave. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your writing always. Hugs
Sangster - K Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your winning placement. This is truly a delightful read and going straight into my faves :-)
Calasibetta Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Charming and delightful! :)Paulette
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 11:11 PM
A lovely poem I missed reading Andrea. It was posted shortly after my son’s death and I couldn’t read poetry at that time. This is one of your best free verse and I am Faving it my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful Podium win. Blessings xxoo
Zahid Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:30 PM
A very fine poem about Meandering. Enjoyed
Radice Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Hi Andrea. Just reading this through for the first time I feel it could be used as a basis for a very effective guided fantasy piece . During my nursing days we would help people who suffered with anxiety to use their imagination by listening to pieces like this with their eyes shut - perhaps with ambient music to accompany the piece. I'm off to read it for a second time. Congratulations on your podium win in Mystic Rose Rose's contest. Cheers - Gary
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:42 PM
thanks so much, Gary. I had considered it maybe for one of the marathon contests. Glad I won with it here.
Hankins Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:16 PM
Andrea, this is a delightful poem, and it was nice to see you on the podium for Mystic Rose Rose's contest. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Holmes Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Andrea- a beautifully written poem - and a well deserved win - Congratulations David
Goldsmith Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. I would love to go "Meandering" in your pretty meadow. Have a blessed day.............
Alex Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 12:30 AM
"My heart became the song of blue bells which danced with the wind beside the brooklet." Indeed, beautiful! Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Back again with congrats on your top win, Andrea!
Brul Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Congratulations dear Andrea! This is one of the finest poem about meandering that I’ve ever read. A fav for me!
Y. Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 4:34 PM
Hi Andrea, I had a feeling this would place high with this amazing write. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-)Alexis
Poet Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this magnificent wandering poem. It's a delight to read.
Proxenos Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 9:44 AM
I am butterfly crazy, in reality as in nature and in the arts, such as poetry, literature and paintings. I can understand your meandering chasing a butterfly - it sounds breathtaking as does your poem! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 8:13 PM
So beautiful, Andrea! You took butterfly imagery to wonderful places! A winner, I’m sure!
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