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Meandering

One spring day meandering in a meadow, I saw a butterfly whose beauty matched that of May's azure sky. With blue silken wings like that of a fairy, she flitted here and there - aimlessly as butterflies seem wont to do. Oh, to be that butterfly, alighting on any pretty flower whose scent delighted me - unhurried and unworried. I would be that butterfly breezing through the meadow meandering . . . meandering . . . to where – I did not know, but soon I found myself beside a brook. My heart became the song of blue bells which danced with the wind beside the brooklet. And as my little friend fluttered on, I careened behind her with arms outstretched, laughing as the long grasses through which I leaped tickled the calves and shins of my legs. Soon I was approaching a grove of tall green trees - meandering . . . meandering. I kept my eyes on the bright blue wings ahead of me. Freely I flowed like the wind that swept through my hair as it fluttered the leaves of the tall green trees until suddenly – the butterfly was vanished from my view! I knew not to where I’d wandered, but in my heart I had no fear. All things come to an end eventually, but also all paths eventually lead to somewhere. Turning myself back toward the direction from which I’d come and with my arms spread wide, I let the butterfly in me take me eastward - meandering . . meandering.

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Date: 3/8/2024 11:28:00 PM
Wow this is beautiful!!! The detailed descriptive language and the way this flows is beyond impeccable! One worthy of all the accolades. I loved so many lines in this but especially “ my heart became the song of blue bells” and also “ unhurried and unworried. I would be that butterfly breezing through the meadow meandering . . . meandering . . .” Just stunning! A fave this is for me. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/7/2024 8:15:00 PM
Dear Andrea, the magic of your golden pen had me “meandering” right there along with you, chasing the enchanting blue butterfly. I loved “my heart became the song of blue bells” - so delightful! A beautiful dreamy poem. Congratulations for your win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/8/2022 3:56:00 AM
I remember reading this Ria... This is such an exquisite write from your magical ink that flows so well in free verse... Am so glad of your great placement with this and hearty congratulations sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/7/2022 7:10:00 AM
This is so fascinating my dear friend Andrea! I love it and goes to my fave. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your writing always. Hugs
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Date: 8/5/2022 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your winning placement. This is truly a delightful read and going straight into my faves :-)
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Date: 8/3/2022 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Charming and delightful! :)Paulette
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Date: 8/2/2022 11:11:00 PM
A lovely poem I missed reading Andrea. It was posted shortly after my son’s death and I couldn’t read poetry at that time. This is one of your best free verse and I am Faving it my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful Podium win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/2/2022 1:30:00 PM
A very fine poem about Meandering. Enjoyed
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Date: 8/2/2022 1:27:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Just reading this through for the first time I feel it could be used as a basis for a very effective guided fantasy piece . During my nursing days we would help people who suffered with anxiety to use their imagination by listening to pieces like this with their eyes shut - perhaps with ambient music to accompany the piece. I'm off to read it for a second time. Congratulations on your podium win in Mystic Rose Rose's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 8/2/2022 1:42:00 PM
thanks so much, Gary. I had considered it maybe for one of the marathon contests. Glad I won with it here.
Date: 8/2/2022 1:16:00 PM
Andrea, this is a delightful poem, and it was nice to see you on the podium for Mystic Rose Rose's contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/22/2021 2:27:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/21/2021 1:56:00 PM
Andrea- a beautifully written poem - and a well deserved win - Congratulations David
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I would love to go "Meandering" in your pretty meadow. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 9/20/2021 12:30:00 AM
"My heart became the song of blue bells which danced with the wind beside the brooklet." Indeed, beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:39:00 PM
Back again with congrats on your top win, Andrea!
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations dear Andrea! This is one of the finest poem about meandering that I’ve ever read. A fav for me!
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Date: 9/19/2021 4:34:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I had a feeling this would place high with this amazing write. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:35:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this magnificent wandering poem. It's a delight to read.
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Date: 9/19/2021 9:44:00 AM
I am butterfly crazy, in reality as in nature and in the arts, such as poetry, literature and paintings. I can understand your meandering chasing a butterfly - it sounds breathtaking as does your poem! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/18/2021 8:13:00 PM
So beautiful, Andrea! You took butterfly imagery to wonderful places! A winner, I’m sure!
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Date: 9/18/2021 5:33:00 PM
Wow! Andrea, I enjoyed the carefree tone and vibe of this poem. Your story was so well written and captivating that I didn't want it to end. Your imagination soared in this write as though you tapped into your inner child. I liked the line about your inner butterfly guiding you back to the right path. Excellent job.Top-notch content and imagery. Congrats in advance. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/18/2021 4:18:00 PM
Hello Andrea, I feel a heartbeating in my ears reading this poem. I love that title, 'Meandering'. You know how to reach out and touch the reader so well.. 'careened behind her with arms outstretched, ~ laughing as the long grasses through which I leaped tickled the calves and shins of my legs. ~~ let the butterfly in me take me eastward - meandering . . meandering.'. This is quite beautiful to find on the last Saturday in summer. Let's hope for more, the theme. -Richard
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Date: 9/18/2021 9:48:00 AM
Marvellous... That's my M word for this wonderful poetry... Lovely imagery throughout...
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Date: 9/18/2021 7:10:00 AM
Great poem for the word M and Meandering ... Love the feel and imagery
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Date: 9/18/2021 6:17:00 AM
Meandering with a butterfly--and song of bluebells. Great imagery , Andrea.
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