Distraction

I meant to do my work today
Instead I spied a nest among the maple leaves
 where birds were singing in the trees
   and others splashing soft brown wings 
                in the birdbath by the old porch swing

I meant to do my chores today
  But clear blue skies, a soft spring breeze
This cloudless day, and blooming trees...they filled me with distraction...

I had my rusty rake in hand, some ground to till
   a hedge to trim, some weeds to pull....but clouds above the rolling hills
                                                                                    all led me to distraction....

 A butterfly, all black and gold, flitted soon across the field
             And once again, it took my eyes yet further still...

The garden hose, curled sleeping by, in noon day sun, awaiting me
        instead I sigh, and 
           once again my wandering eye, 
                among tall grass, some bugs I spied, 
                            I must explore the whole outdoors before this lovely day has died

I hesitate, ....my chores can wait, 
                                it seems that fate says "Work can wait!!
                                                      Enjoy!! It says, this splendid day!! 

These  most worthy,  so pleasing, never bothersome, soul satisflying, quite heavenly 
                                                               
                                                  distractions !!


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Harper Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 2:55 PM
Carrie, I definitely relate to this poem, excellent form, good use of emotion. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest.
Guzzi Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 2:39 PM
ahhhh yes sieze the day! Congrad's on this fine write and win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Zippedy Do Dah!". Love, Carol
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September 18, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in the Zippedy Do Dah contest.. a super piece ..enjoy a sweet victory tonight with luv...
Haick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Brilliant write, Carrie! Goes to my favs! My congratulations on your win in Mac's contest! Thanks for commenting on my poems, also! Peace, love, Audrey
Brown Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Mac's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 7:39 AM
congrats to YOU beautiful and talented poetess!!! so well deserved. you are a shining star in every way! love & hugs xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 7:20 AM
They are much better than WORK!! This is a very enjoyable read, and a big congratulations! LUv,Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Congrats Carrie on your second place win in Mac's contest.. an amazing write ... a wonderful win .. for a talented poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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February 11, 2010 at 5:41 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your 2nd place win. I love your poem. It is a pleasure to read and demonstrates your great talent. Mac
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April 14, 2009 at 5:39 AM
This is truly a msterpiece in my eyes!!! Carrie, thanks for writing this Beautiful piece..Love Always Your Friend-Rhonda Kay
Gass Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 7:45 AM
So glad these beautiful images distracted you, Carrie. You have painted a lovely picture with your wonderfully inspiered write! Love always, Robin
Bingham Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 10:36 PM
I can't help but laugh at Laurie's comment, shoot that maybe be what is wrong with me. Your poem was great and so was L.G.'s comment. God Bless and enjoy the springtime, Ron
Goff Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 6:48 PM
Carrie, adore the spirit and symetry of flow in this wonder... touching the earth poem!!... jimmy
Ginn Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Ahhh a girl after my own heart...you do know it's ADHD and they do have medication
Winter Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 4:08 PM
Carrie, I would constantly be distracted too by nature on such a gorgeous day with such beauty all around me. Nature is so spiritual to me, and obviously to you too. A lighthearted, beautifully written poem this may be, yet there are many deeper feelings that I know came into play, and those may be for another poem, to keep this one a sheer delight. Going to write you back now, so check your soup mail soon. You have a constant, amazing gift, and that's a fact. Love, Shar
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April 10, 2009 at 2:32 PM
I love the distraction in this piece...you couldn't get the chores done because of the beauty that held your attention.. this is done well...love the opening..it just held me throughout. Thanks for the comments today.
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April 10, 2009 at 2:16 PM
Nature's "distractions" may be God's way of allowing us to recognize the things that are really important. You have such a gentle, flowing writing style, Carrie. Always a pleasure to see your new poems! Happy Easter, Carolyn
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