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Echo, Enduring, Empty Poetry Contest

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"In the echo of silence, the whispers of the Divine are heard." By Rumi I entered the winding path into the captivating vale Surrounded by ice-capped mountains and ancient trees Firs, larches, redwoods, spruce, and ash, all grand I shouted in glee: “I’m here!” All around some Echo replied. A repetitive Echo, always vibrating and mesmerising. What a singular sound to hear nature at its best! I lounged beneath the shade of an old maple tree, Where the verdant vale lay sprawled in front of me. Balmy breezes blew through dark green trees, an Echo divine. Tiny thrushes flitted from bush to bush. They permeated the vale with their familiar songs. Occasionally they rested on a dense bush, Hush! Did I hear the song again? Choirs of echo resounded all around the lush plateau. Down on the majestic plain, a babbling brook meandered Towards a clump of cottages, providing water for all. The rivulet was a sight with fronds of ferns unfolding. How delightful to hear the water emanating such dulcet echo As the stream zigzagged around rocks and small waterfalls. Every echo ended in silence profound and I was in God’s peace. A holy hymn hummed serene: echo after echo, all divine. Placed 1

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Date: 6/15/2025 11:02:00 AM
- Back with a congrats, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 6/15/2025 6:02:00 AM
Love the light alliteration dear Victor. Nature is comforting and caring. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/14/2025 9:51:00 PM
Very pretty and inviting, would like to go walking myself, lol congrats on your win
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Date: 6/14/2025 3:29:00 PM
another gem from your pen Victor! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:38:00 AM
Wow. I really enjoyed this today! It took me to a special place. A Fave for me :)
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:31:00 AM
Very beautiful, Victor. A master story-teller. All nature has a voice, a song if we listen with soulfully tuned ears and heart. Great write!
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Date: 6/13/2025 11:24:00 PM
Wow, this is like taking a chill, scenic stroll right through your words! I love how you’ve got those echoes bouncing around like nature’s own DJ, keeping the vibe alive. The birds, the babbling brook, the ancient trees. And that ending? I’m feeling those good and peaceful vibes all the way. A fave dear Victor...Hugs
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Date: 6/13/2025 6:37:00 PM
May you always be bathed in the echoes of the Divine whether in heaven or earth, for it will always make us rejoice when we hear that heavenly sound.
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Date: 6/13/2025 5:26:00 PM
beautiful poetry, same feelings too about nature and god have a nice week end
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Date: 6/13/2025 12:03:00 PM
Victor, this poem is just stunning! The way you use diction to describe the peacefulness that nature provides is pure enchantment.
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Date: 6/13/2025 10:41:00 AM
Hi, Victor. Thank you for sharing and captivating my attention in every line. And the ending WOW!!! A peaceful way to imagine the slowing of the last heartbeats. Every line is divine and the sound is beautiful. Enjoyed, always ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/13/2025 2:05:00 AM
- A wonderful echo poem, Victor :) - A top winning poem in my ears :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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Date: 6/12/2025 10:52:00 PM
Dear Victor, this poem is absolutely breathtaking! The way you weave words to capture the serenity of nature is pure magic. I love how you've used the theme of echoes to convey the sense of connection with the divine. The imagery is vivid and immersive, I feel like I'm right there with you, surrounded by ancient trees and the sweet songs of thrushes. You're a true poet! Best, Anne
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Date: 6/12/2025 6:15:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, so magical and melodious! Anyone would be happy indeed, to get to visit such a place. :)
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Date: 6/12/2025 10:37:00 AM
WOW!!! Once again a wonderful write and picture. I love your line, "I shouted in glee: “I’m here!” All around some Echo replied." "Good Luck" This is a winner for me. I also did this contest. Have a lovely day writing away..........
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Date: 6/12/2025 7:37:00 AM
This is so beautiful and profound, dear Victor! The way you've gorgeously incorporated nature in your immaculate use of imagery here, just feels so soulfully soothing in every manner. This piece indeed sounds like a spiritual echo! Finding peace in the almighty's embrace... what can be better!? So wonderful! Light and best wishes to you always, good luck in the contest ~
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Date: 6/12/2025 6:40:00 AM
So beautiful, Victor! Perhaps behind the scenes a glorious echo of eternity! I hope you win! A fave for me!
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Date: 6/12/2025 5:49:00 AM
Beautifully written nature scene with a dollop of reverence for the divine. We'd all like to join you there
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Date: 6/12/2025 4:27:00 AM
I enjoyed this one, Victor. I agree we hear God in the silence when we can get alone with Him. Sara K..It reads like a winner to me.
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Date: 6/12/2025 2:39:00 AM
Isn’t it a beautiful sound when an echo rebounds all around, then leaves behind silence profound, it’s alike the amen to a prayer. Divine poetry Victor… Beryl
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