The Daisy

In my bed.
Winter blahs.
Colorless ground
Icy jaws.

I poke my head
Timidly forth.
I see some green
I feel some warmth.

I stretch my tendrils
Toward the sky.
Spindly spikes
Reaching high.

Slowly my body
Unclenches, unfurls
Displaying a wonder
Color and curls.

I dance in the breeze
In joyous abandon
I bow and I spin
Appearing quite random.

But when I pause
In the sunshine of life
I see the most wondrous
Sight of my life.

Right here, in my bed,
While I flitted, oblivious,
Was done a miracle
Not usually privy us.

For far as I looked
To my left and my right
My front and my back
In day and in night.

Fields of color
Pastel, neon, bright.
All posing and twisting
To find the best light.

I bow to their beauty
They bow back in kind
Diversity fills
My sight and my mind.

Some neighbors are dark
Some shorter, some tall
Some petals reach up
Some bend, swoop and fall.

Some dropped by a bird,
Some planted with love,
But all finding life
From the Source up above.

I'm thankful for color
In every direction.
I'm thankful for difference
Not boring reflection.

Joyful integration.
But more work ahead.
My neighbors and I
Hope to make our bed spread!

So take it from me
The humblest of flower
In difference is strength,
A rainbow has power!

Love is the key;
With light always sow.
And life will be fruitful,
Your kingdom will grow.





2nd place in theme #7 colors, judged  1/28/2016

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Date: 7/2/2018 12:15:00 PM
Cindi.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me...
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:20:00 PM
Cindi, I love this poem! Your personification of the daisy is so creative and paints a delightful visual! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/5/2016 12:45:00 AM
Cindi, Congratulations in the SKAT contest. LINDA
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:33:00 PM
Colourful poetry Cindi.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:33:00 PM
Your poem took me to every color of the rainbow Cindi, Congrats.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 1/28/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 1/28/2016 10:28:00 AM
What a beautiful colorful write and read my pen friend. The flow of this was as sweet as water flowing over a rock with nature's melody in tow. WOW! impressed and would have liked to seen this as a first place win......Sharon : ) A (7) for me and a fav.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 1/28/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much! Can't wait to read yours!
Date: 1/28/2016 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome colorful poem!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 1/28/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you! Want to read your poems too.
Date: 1/28/2016 9:38:00 AM
I don't know why I chose this poem with a second placement. All I know is that I read it 3 times, and the flow was perfect from start to end. You also got me with the colors of a humble flower. Awesome colors with power. Cindi, Congratulations on your awesome colored win. Drop by my blog " Character Sketch" if ya like. LOVE ** SKAT **
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 1/28/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Skat! LOVE your poetry! Especially the dark yet humorous ones! Keep writing!
Date: 8/30/2015 1:59:00 PM
Yep, that's a great poem :) I enjoy your poetry is it ok if I post some of it on my arts website?
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 8/30/2015 2:34:00 PM
Absolutely! Thank you for your feedback.
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