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Impressions From a Stone Skipped On Water

He grabbed me up from where I lay, peaceful in the sun, with my brothers and my sisters round about me. I felt four digits seeming to be one of a whole, which clasped around my form. A fifth one, slightly broader, pressed onto me from my other side. And then with a jolt, I found myself next lifted high into air, the dry hot bed beneath me but a whisper of my past. Accustomed, at the most, to being trodden upon, I barely had the time to assimilate this rare experience (I seemed to remember a sweeter touch long ago from a smaller being who had picked me up, examined me and then placed me back on the ground). Suddenly, I was moving, this time unsupported, through the air. I spied in a single spinning moment a world I’d not envisioned from the spot on earth I'd shared with pebble siblings. In that place, we were surrounded by greenery that blocked our view and by giant old gray boulders, my ancestors perhaps. Reposing heavily as if attached to land, one such silent sentry supported him, the creature who had flung me far from my home. I found myself then bump, bump, bumping along, making little rings across a shiny stretch of blue. And when I lost momentum, I disappeared beneath the final circle I’d created. It felt much like the times I had been buried in cold whiteness, but this instead was liquid cool! I dropped down and down, onto a different kind of ground, unusually soft and sticky, the way earth used to feel for me after a sudden downpour. Settled there, I noticed brown and silver shapes that flitted past above me, much smaller than many of the creatures of the land above me, but swifter. Also there were tall green blades that swayed in place. They resembled those that stood on solid ground. Best of all, I saw around me others of my kind; a multitude of us, small, beautiful and round, with whom to share my soft new cozy bed! June 25, 2017 Submitted Aug. 8, 2021 for the Stone Poetry contest of Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 12/30/2021 8:23:00 PM
Great write, Andrea, love the setting and the mood of the whole verse. Happy New Year with prayers answered and resolutions accomplished.
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:19:00 AM
Wow - a FAVE - unbelievable how well you thought this through in detail. Beautifully penned, Andrea. A real beauty.
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Date: 7/29/2017 1:15:00 PM
Awesome write :) favs
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Date: 7/3/2017 10:48:00 AM
Loved this Andrea, initially it sounded quite sensual then you brought the stone to life. A great write.
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Date: 7/2/2017 5:10:00 PM
You really became one with the little stone Andrea in this imaginative creative piece. I can tell you put much thought into this one and I hope to see it a top winner my friend! : )
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Date: 6/27/2017 4:58:00 PM
This is lovely, creative and imaginative, Andrea. Lucky pebble...you sure gave it life! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/26/2017 11:35:00 PM
This is such a creative writing and so out of the box. Fabulous poem. Andrea, thanks a lot for the soupy and helping me out.
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:53:00 PM
As for my poem, "So, what's new?" I wanted to see if I can pack my feelings in such a small write, and the syllable count - I've always tried to restrict myself to some syllable count, this time I thought, why not try a big line followed by a smaller one, somehow makes it rhythmic:)
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:49:00 PM
Now who would have thought of writing from a pebble's perspective?? Very unique and imaginative, Andrea, beautiful too:)
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:18:00 PM
Very creative write Andrea, and all within a stone's throw..Well written..
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Date: 6/26/2017 4:14:00 PM
Artist of imagery. Great poem from a stones point of view.
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Date: 6/26/2017 12:40:00 PM
I love it Andrea. Great imagery throughout
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Date: 6/26/2017 7:41:00 AM
What a beautiful imagery!It's so unique... Excellent descriptions Andrea...Good luck with the contest....
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Date: 6/26/2017 5:56:00 AM
WOW!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/26/2017 4:09:00 AM
- Andrea, a incredible poem ! - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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