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Random thoughts flitted
You were my whole foundation
And I was a fool









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  Haiku 5-7-5
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  12.06.2016
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- Published in the newspaper 29.06.2016

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Vladislav Raven Date: 8/14/2016 2:28:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, i had to drop by one of your amazing Haiku today. It is a sad Haiky, but as always it is an excellent Haiku. Excellent content and well writeen as always. This is a seven and a fave Anne-Lise. I always love your well thought out Haiku. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/14/2016 2:36:00 PM - ............ and it is always a pleasure to see you, Mike - Thanks for lovely visits a 7 + fav. and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 6/17/2016 1:19:00 AM Sad, But well written:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2016 8:24:00 AM - Thank you, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 6/14/2016 5:09:00 PM Wonderfully done my lovely lovely friend. Good luck with a 7 in the contest. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/15/2016 1:16:00 PM - Thank you my friend, bL :) - (Not for contest) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2016 6:09:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise, Very powerfully expressed. We are all fools at one time or another in our respective lives. Enjoyed your Haiku here!! "TR" -- Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/14/2016 7:41:00 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/13/2016 12:41:00 PM from being the foundation to a fool... lovely transition and a greeat 'ku, anne.. happy day and huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 12:53:00 PM - Thank you my friend, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski Date: 6/13/2016 11:39:00 AM true.... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 11:41:00 AM - Thank you my friend, Lenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 6/13/2016 9:09:00 AM Many play the fool for they do not know what they have until it is gone... lovely Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 9:25:00 AM - So true, Tim - Thank you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen Date: 6/13/2016 8:47:00 AM Excellent poem, thanks for posting........A.M. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 9:26:00 AM - Thank you my friend, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/13/2016 7:53:00 AM Absolutely brilliant! No matter if you were a fool for now you are wise dear, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 8:34:00 AM - Thank you my friend, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Garth von Buchholz Date: 6/13/2016 2:38:00 AM Very direct and powerful. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 7:47:00 AM - Straight talk :) - Thank you Garth von Buchholz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/12/2016 5:16:00 PM very well done, Sunshine. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 7:46:00 AM - Thank you my friend, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray Date: 6/12/2016 5:01:00 PM "Defination of love? A misunderstanding between two fools." Lovely Haiku. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 7:46:00 AM - Maybe, maybe not :) - Thank you my friend, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2016 3:03:00 PM Oh so sad a poem Anne Lise - am sure many a youngster can relate:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2016 7:44:00 AM - Thank you my friend, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/12/2016 2:22:00 PM Teens turn to the wrong foundation sometimes..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2016 2:35:00 PM - School of life, thank you Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/12/2016 1:38:00 PM Oh....this is a sad write, my dear Sunshine. Very well written though. Sending you hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2016 2:03:00 PM - Thank you my friend, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)