I knew I would find it somewhere

~ I drifted past the sunset where horizons make their place Imaginary lineage that artists love to trace I saw the world illumined in a shade of tangerine Beyond the treelined silhouette and shadows in between I scaled a distant mountain that was massive in its size Where I could taste the altitude amidst blueberry skies When then I saw a sparrow as it flitted on the wing And followed it, just listening in hopes that it would sing It took me down a pathway, round the bend and every turn Then rested in an olive tree beside a river fern I bid farewell and strolled along, directions heading west For this I hoped would lead me too my early morning quest A squirrel danced above me in the branches of the trees, A firefly then floated by, like surfing on the breeze I watched in endless wonder as the world about me turned Took little notes in scribbled thoughts of all that I had learned When up ahead I see a spark, a tiny orb of gold As half a day had come and gone, if every truth be told It seems I've found my treasure, there it sits before my eyes The one thing I've been searching for, a beautiful sunrise
Good morning, Soupers
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Hamilton Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 3:16 PM
Beautiful write Chris congats on potd, a worthy winner.
Godwin Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 8:04 PM
PURE Poetic Excitement. I got chills. This write is pure gold, like most of yours, and like most of yours, gifts me poetic pleasure ... CayCay
Green Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. It is so nice to see you again. I appreciate your kindness, always
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 4:55 AM
Congrats, Chris, on POTD! A lovely poem!
Green Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 5:31 AM
Thanks Kim
Me Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 8:24 PM
The poem just takes my breath away. I appreciate the realism.It felt as though if I were in the poem…Another masterful write. Congratulations ????
Green Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 7:37 AM
I appreciate your kindness. Thank you so much
There Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 4:39 PM
Loved this beautiful, peaceful escape! So deserving of its winner's ribbon! Congratulations, Chris! Felt like I was there, somehow ~ a fav to come back to, for sure!
Green Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked this one.
Greenhough Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed this trip through so much landscape, until finally finding a sunrise. I like the title. It adds mystery.
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 2:28 PM
Thank you so much Hilda
Kitchin Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Chris, a wonderful poem with beautiful nature imagery. Congratulations on POTD.
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:31 PM
Thank you so very much Tania. I appreciate your kind words
Bartley Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Good morning, POTD Mr. Green. Thanks for sharing!
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Thank you so very much
Slaughter Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Well, Chris, this amazing piece is certainly a "treasure". I'm so happy I read it today. Congrats on POTD, as well.
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:42 AM
Thanks so much Jim. I am glad you enjoyed this
Nicole Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:57 AM
I must say, as an artist, I ' love to trace ' and embrace; those ' blueberry skies. ' Your words are beyond beautiful, they're soft and dreamy. Simply breathtaking. :) I enjoy drifting in the sky, curling clouds around me. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:42 AM
Thanks so much Brandy. I appreciate all of the nice things you say about my poetry. I am happy you liked this one.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write. What a great ending you have here. Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win.........................
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Paula, I am honored.
Wolf Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Thanks for the wake up verse, Chris! Bask in that sunshine! ~ Deep in the heart of T
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Nice to see you again.
Rodgers Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Hello Chris, Wow, your poem and POTD have left me in a virtual sunrise. I felt like I was right there with you, drifting past that tangerine sunset, scaling that massive mountain, and following that sparrow through winding paths. Here's to more sunrises, my friend. And to the wonderful journey of getting there. Congratulations!! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Thanks so very much Daniel. I appreciate your comment
Williams Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 2:49 AM
Long time no see Chris, so glad to see you getting POTD on this gem. Congratulations...Maria
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:30 AM
You know, like a bad penny. : ) Thanks Maria.
Jones Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 2:40 AM
So excited to see you got potd for this wonderful work Chris! Congratulations!
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Thanks so much Karen. I appreciate you
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:35 AM
- A wonderful poem, Chris :) - The beauty of nature... discovering how beautiful it is around you is perhaps more significant than we realize :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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March 6, 2025 at 1:31 AM
Sunrise and sunsets are just the best. A wonderful poetic journey you’ve taken the readers on Chris. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Thanks so much Beryl.
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:23 AM
Such an amazing write. Enjoyed reading. Hearty congratulations on your potd honor Chris Green. God Bless. ~ Ani
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:32 AM
Thank you so very much Anitha
Gifford Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:04 AM
Hello Chris, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautifully written piece. Seeing the sunrise is a beautiful thing. Have a wonderful day.
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:32 AM
Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it.
Seeker Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:01 AM
A beautiful melody, slow, subtle, spiritual buildup to the finale ~ warmest congratulations on POTD, Green
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:32 AM
Thanks so very much.
Lane Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 12:48 AM
A potd for your sunrise walk. Congratulations, Chris. The treasure to us would be if you posted more often. Yes, that’s a not so subtle hint.
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Yeah, I noticed. Go figure, huh? Thanks again my friend
Cunningham Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 12:32 AM
Nothing beats a glorious sunrise, congratulations to you Chris on the honour of POTD. Tom
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Thanks so much Tom
Bauer Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 4:20 PM
it was a joy to join you on this beautiful journey today, chris, although my timing is a little off. i often take my morning walk when the sun is rising (actually, the colors are much more spectacular before that actually happens) so i can appreciate the "treasure" you have found here...
Green Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:34 AM
Thanks so much Ilene. So nice to see you again.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 10:03 AM
Hello Chris, I have enjoyed the nature walk with you in poetry. This poem is my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Hello Chris, This was a lovely nature wlak with you in poetry. You are very welcome. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Green Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Thank you so much Darlene
Lane Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Sunrises are well worth the time spent waiting for dawn to awaken him. And in the light of his yawning, we find a treasure of gold. Your usual cadence abounds, Chris. I'm sending you a soup mail.
Green Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Thanks so much Lin. I am happy you stopped by.
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