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I knew I would find it somewhere

~ I drifted past the sunset where horizons make their place Imaginary lineage that artists love to trace I saw the world illumined in a shade of tangerine Beyond the treelined silhouette and shadows in between I scaled a distant mountain that was massive in its size Where I could taste the altitude amidst blueberry skies When then I saw a sparrow as it flitted on the wing And followed it, just listening in hopes that it would sing It took me down a pathway, round the bend and every turn Then rested in an olive tree beside a river fern I bid farewell and strolled along, directions heading west For this I hoped would lead me too my early morning quest A squirrel danced above me in the branches of the trees, A firefly then floated by, like surfing on the breeze I watched in endless wonder as the world about me turned Took little notes in scribbled thoughts of all that I had learned When up ahead I see a spark, a tiny orb of gold As half a day had come and gone, if every truth be told It seems I've found my treasure, there it sits before my eyes The one thing I've been searching for, a beautiful sunrise
Good morning, Soupers

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Date: 3/17/2025 8:04:00 PM
PURE Poetic Excitement. I got chills. This write is pure gold, like most of yours, and like most of yours, gifts me poetic pleasure ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 3/18/2025 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. It is so nice to see you again. I appreciate your kindness, always
Date: 3/12/2025 4:55:00 AM
Congrats, Chris, on POTD! A lovely poem!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/12/2025 5:31:00 AM
Thanks Kim
Date: 3/7/2025 8:24:00 PM
The poem just takes my breath away. I appreciate the realism.It felt as though if I were in the poem…Another masterful write. Congratulations ????
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Chris Green
Date: 3/10/2025 7:37:00 AM
I appreciate your kindness. Thank you so much
Date: 3/6/2025 4:39:00 PM
Loved this beautiful, peaceful escape! So deserving of its winner's ribbon! Congratulations, Chris! Felt like I was there, somehow ~ a fav to come back to, for sure!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/10/2025 7:36:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked this one.
Date: 3/6/2025 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed this trip through so much landscape, until finally finding a sunrise. I like the title. It adds mystery.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Hilda
Date: 3/6/2025 12:54:00 PM
Chris, a wonderful poem with beautiful nature imagery. Congratulations on POTD.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 1:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much Tania. I appreciate your kind words
Date: 3/6/2025 11:37:00 AM
Good morning, POTD Mr. Green. Thanks for sharing!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 11:43:00 AM
Thank you so very much
Date: 3/6/2025 10:50:00 AM
Well, Chris, this amazing piece is certainly a "treasure". I'm so happy I read it today. Congrats on POTD, as well.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 11:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Jim. I am glad you enjoyed this
Date: 3/6/2025 8:57:00 AM
I must say, as an artist, I ' love to trace ' and embrace; those ' blueberry skies. ' Your words are beyond beautiful, they're soft and dreamy. Simply breathtaking. :) I enjoy drifting in the sky, curling clouds around me. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 11:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Brandy. I appreciate all of the nice things you say about my poetry. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 3/6/2025 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write. What a great ending you have here. Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win.........................
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Paula, I am honored.
Date: 3/6/2025 6:14:00 AM
Thanks for the wake up verse, Chris! Bask in that sunshine! ~ Deep in the heart of T
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Nice to see you again.
Date: 3/6/2025 5:12:00 AM
Hello Chris, Wow, your poem and POTD have left me in a virtual sunrise. I felt like I was right there with you, drifting past that tangerine sunset, scaling that massive mountain, and following that sparrow through winding paths. Here's to more sunrises, my friend. And to the wonderful journey of getting there. Congratulations!! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:30:00 AM
Thanks so very much Daniel. I appreciate your comment
Date: 3/6/2025 2:49:00 AM
Long time no see Chris, so glad to see you getting POTD on this gem. Congratulations...Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:30:00 AM
You know, like a bad penny. : ) Thanks Maria.
Date: 3/6/2025 2:40:00 AM
So excited to see you got potd for this wonderful work Chris! Congratulations!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Karen. I appreciate you
Date: 3/6/2025 1:35:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Chris :) - The beauty of nature... discovering how beautiful it is around you is perhaps more significant than we realize :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:31:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 3/6/2025 1:31:00 AM
Sunrise and sunsets are just the best. A wonderful poetic journey you’ve taken the readers on Chris. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Beryl.
Date: 3/6/2025 1:23:00 AM
Such an amazing write. Enjoyed reading. Hearty congratulations on your potd honor Chris Green. God Bless. ~ Ani
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anitha
Date: 3/6/2025 1:04:00 AM
Hello Chris, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautifully written piece. Seeing the sunrise is a beautiful thing. Have a wonderful day.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 3/6/2025 1:01:00 AM
A beautiful melody, slow, subtle, spiritual buildup to the finale ~ warmest congratulations on POTD, Green
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:32:00 AM
Thanks so very much.
Date: 3/6/2025 12:48:00 AM
A potd for your sunrise walk. Congratulations, Chris. The treasure to us would be if you posted more often. Yes, that’s a not so subtle hint.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:33:00 AM
Yeah, I noticed. Go figure, huh? Thanks again my friend
Date: 3/6/2025 12:32:00 AM
Nothing beats a glorious sunrise, congratulations to you Chris on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Tom
Date: 3/5/2025 4:20:00 PM
it was a joy to join you on this beautiful journey today, chris, although my timing is a little off. i often take my morning walk when the sun is rising (actually, the colors are much more spectacular before that actually happens) so i can appreciate the "treasure" you have found here...
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2025 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so much Ilene. So nice to see you again.
Date: 3/5/2025 10:03:00 AM
Hello Chris, I have enjoyed the nature walk with you in poetry. This poem is my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/6/2025 7:34:00 AM
Hello Chris, This was a lovely nature wlak with you in poetry. You are very welcome. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Chris Green
Date: 3/5/2025 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene
Date: 3/5/2025 8:02:00 AM
Sunrises are well worth the time spent waiting for dawn to awaken him. And in the light of his yawning, we find a treasure of gold. Your usual cadence abounds, Chris. I'm sending you a soup mail.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/5/2025 8:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Lin. I am happy you stopped by.
Date: 3/5/2025 5:48:00 AM
I've seen plenty of sunsets but I really need to do a proper sunrise. Beautiful poetry and rhymes. The third stanza is my fave. Who doesn't love blueberry skies?
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Chris Green
Date: 3/5/2025 6:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Sir

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