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YOU HAVE TAKEN EVERYTHING

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YOU HAVE TAKEN EVERYTHING

YOU HAVE TAKEN EVERYTHING

All I can see in your evil eyes
are all the lies from the dark side?
I see age of evil, that brings on pains
In your eyes of darken dreams
I see many things I would never want 
my life to be,
I could stay in this moment forever 
Dark Angel, your spirit holds agony 
In place of the circumstances,
I see you standing out in the pouring rain
You are looking deep into my eyes
While I sleep in darken dreams
I could reach every star in the sky
That are lost into your painful eyes
you made my life all about you
I had lost myself in all your emotions
I consider all that your eyes hold
are fantasy of you and me
I still look very young
I miss the beauty of my day’s 
You keep me young in darken dreams,
because of you
I lost who I am
I lost what is real in my life,
just when everything felt right 
you told your lies
Oh, how that cut me deep within like a knife 
then you looked at me with a smile on your face
laugh every day at me while my life slipped on by
in darken dreams of fake believe
You are evil, something of ancient time
You are something from the night
You’re not very nice
my heart can't possibly break
I must stay awake
You had taken me so for down
My life doesn’t have any meaning to it
But it wasn't even whole to start with
because of you I will never trust ever again
Oh, this pain you give has no end
I will always in the dooms of you
I never stray too far from you 
Because I knew not too
you left your mark 
my heart was ripped apart 
Now all I can see is your eyes of darken dream.

Poetic Judy Emery © 1980
The Queen Of Darken Dreams Poetic Judy Emery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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