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Wo kagaz ki kashti Wo barish ka pani

Ye Dolet Bhe Le Lo Ye Shohret Bhe Le Lo Bhaly Chheen Lo Mujh Se Meri Jawaani.... Magar Mujh Ko Lota Do Bachpan Ka Sawan Wo Kaghaz Ki Kashti Wo Barish Ka Pani Muhallay Ki Sabse Purani Nishaani Wo Burhiya Jise Bachhe Kahte The Naani Wo Naani Ki Baton Me Paryon Ka Dera Wo Chehre Ki Jhurion Me Sadion Ka Phera. Bhulaaye Nahi Bhool Sakta Hai Koi Wo Chhoti Si Raten Wo Lambi Kahani Kabhi Rait Ke onche Teelon Pe Jana Gharonde Banana Bana Kar Mitana... Wo Masum Chahat Ki Tasveir Apne Wo Khabon Khiyalon Ki Jageer Apne Na Duniya Ka Gham Tha Na Rishton Ke Bandhan Bari Khoobsurat Thi Wo Zindagani Ye Doulat Bhi Le Lo, Ye Shohrat Bhi Le Lo Bhale Chheen Lo Mujh Se Meri Jawaani Magar Mujh Ko Lota Do Bachpan Ka Sawan Wo Kaghaz Ki Kashti Wo Barish Ka Pani...

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Date: 8/6/2016 1:53:00 AM
Aamir Shehzad, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/3/2016 1:01:00 AM
Aamir,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 8/2/2016 2:40:00 PM
You need to translate this into English Aamir
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