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Wish Upon A Star

Moonlight shone upon her As she wished upon a star What price would it incur For wishes that were so far Need for it to come true Would each have price Could happiness ensue Her hope for a paradise Wishes for a kind of love That few would ever find Wishes sent to up above Hoped stars to be so kind So she wished every night For true love that would fill Praying the brightest starlight For that love one day reveal And so she sat awaiting The wish to come to be The thought intoxicating One day to be her realtiy

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Date: 1/12/2019 9:53:00 AM
An enchanting little piece of poetry, Poetess...has an attached charm and innocence about it all that is all rather disarming - quite lovely! With much fondness. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2019 6:22:00 AM
Ah john thank you for always being so good to me!;) All my affection Brenda
Date: 1/12/2019 7:26:00 AM
Wish on a star while life passes her by...but then I suppose we all have our fantasies. Nicely written Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2019 6:21:00 AM
Lol yes I guess we do! Where would we be without them my dear friend!;) Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/11/2019 11:47:00 PM
Very beautiful verse Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2019 1:23:00 AM
Thanks Art appreciate your stopping by! And your comment!;) Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/11/2019 4:11:00 PM
What a lovely piece Brenda, truly uplifting and inspiring. Hope all good with you this day. The final line, should last word be 'reality'? Have a great weekend, Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2019 1:22:00 AM
Thanks Gordon! Have great weekend! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/11/2019 11:40:00 AM
That is so Beautiful my friend, truth!! Now that's poetry!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2019 11:45:00 AM
Ah Bobby thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!;) Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/11/2019 7:02:00 AM
Really nice, this seems like the other side of the poem I posted last night, from her point of view. This was fantastic my sweet friend. I loved this.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Chris! I'm glad you did! Your poem was truly beautiful and I cod never match the beauty of yours! Hugs Brenda