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Gentle, delicate flutters Movement careful & slow Whispers in the moonlight Whispers as you flow Your wings cascade with beauty True colours blend and seep Whispering wings so precious They almost make me weep They whisper of true dawning The dawning of the day The day you became a butterfly And gently flew away Written 12th January 2022 Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke Whispering Wings Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/14/2022 5:00:00 PM
Nice rhyme, Angela. I like poems about beautiful butterflies. :-) Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Angela Tune
Date: 1/14/2022 5:08:00 PM
Thankyou Bill
Date: 1/14/2022 5:24:00 AM
The gentle whispers and the light movements of the butterfly, captured so magnificently, Angela !
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Angela Tune
Date: 1/14/2022 9:15:00 AM
Ah Thankyou so much Valsa for your lovely comment x
Date: 1/13/2022 3:13:00 PM
I love your last line, the butterfly gently flew away like the day, winning wishes Angela
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Angela Tune
Date: 1/13/2022 3:14:00 PM
Awww Thankyou x