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West Australia, Our State

It feels good to take long strolls
It’s a pleasure to one’s soul
In the bushlands, it feels so great
We have much nature in our state
Here in the west we respect nature
Because nature has so much allure
Our wetlands we preserve and keep them clean
To walk along their trails, is so serene

In Perth, we have so many Kangaroos
You’ll find them in our parks, golf courses too
Walking those wetland trails is great to do
Sometimes I’ve walked these trails the whole day through

Many tiger snakes are here
But they don’t give me no fear
I’ve never felt danger from these
Though none should ever them displease
The birds found here they are so beautiful
I love to hear Kookaburras call
So many birds of colour you’ll find here
These wild, wild, places, I do hold so dear

West Australia is so very fine
Most who come here, they really love our wine
Sometimes our sun it tends to over shine
But all, in all our country is divine
That I always speak of as mine

*Pedro’s rhyming assortment by Peter Duggan has
4 verses.
1st verse has 4 couplets 1stcouplet line count 7.  2nd counts 8.  3rd counts 9
4th fourth counts 10.
Next a 4 line verse all lines count 10 all rhyming.
3rd verse a repeat of 1st verse but with different rhymes
4th verse is repeated with an extra rhyming line that counts 8
Thus 1st verse rhymes  7a7a, 8b8b, 9c9c, 10d10d
2nd verse 10e,10e,10e,10e
3rd  Verse 7f 7f  8g 8g  9h 9h 10i 10i.
4th verse 10J 10j 10j 10j  Plus Extra line 8 j  Aligned Left when done

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Date: 1/13/2019 6:22:00 AM
Your words want me to visit it more and more.. Maybe soon.. Loved your poem my friend..
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/13/2019 5:13:00 PM
G'day Silent. the cockney from Peckham that I was, this country became a paradise to me, and I have never regretted coming here. Perth is a real laid back place to live in. I have lived in Queensland, Sidney, and Melbourne. But to me this is really the best in my opinion. It would be nice to see you, my friend. all the best ..Peter
Date: 1/12/2019 6:14:00 PM
Peter, I was waiting for the Kookaburras call - the actual sound. Now I am looking for it on U-tube. I always thought kookaburra was a funny word that was an imaginary bird.
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/13/2019 5:47:00 PM
Hi Caren. if you heard these birds laughing as the dawn comes in, along with all the cockatoos and Lorikeets they would give you the shits. but I am up at four oclock so I don't mind at all. Thank you for your kind comments, my friend...Peter
Date: 1/12/2019 6:02:00 PM
Hello Peter, as i read this poem I was hoping for a verse of the kola bears. I think they are cute. I have enjoyed your poetry. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/13/2019 5:49:00 PM
Hi Darlene, we don't see many Koalas around here. But plenty of kangaroos, and some beautiful birds. Thank you for your kind comments, my friend....peter