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Watery Death

sorrow silver streams I see my mirror muse soul for my loved ones swim shadows family friends dead they weave dew messages through rainbow drops of light to me lonely life lingers time twirls my ticking thinking I plead my promise poems they live in my words alive in my soul and mind forever my fingers paint rusty memories aching like a fallen leaf family tree cut downward at sunset I sit listening to talking streams my heart rises as full moon May 13th 2020 Contest: I will never forget Sponsor: Silent One I will never forget

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Date: 5/22/2020 2:55:00 PM
Keep up this fantastic writing. Outstanding Sedoku. Big congrats and hugs on a win. Panagiota xoxo
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:25:00 AM
Chantelle, lovely imagery and alliterations, "my heart rises as full moon" is my favorite of many nice phrases. Well done, and congrats on your win! ~ John
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Date: 5/17/2020 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on your placement and a very emotional poem! Flows so beautifully!
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:44:00 AM
I experienced multiple emotions while reading, nostalgia, sadness and bliss. Congratulations Chantelle :)
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Date: 5/17/2020 7:55:00 AM
My heart rises as full moon.. great last line in this deeply emotive poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/13/2020 6:24:00 PM
Beautifully rendered Chantelle, it settles on the soul this. My best to you in the contest, xomo
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