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Walking Baby's Journey

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Taking baby steps these days, they hurt less than leaps and bounds. An unusually negative way of saying: small steps feel more contenting right now, than larger plans for different memories. What are these larger plans for different memories you back away from right now? How might you hang onto this dream or avoid this nightmare while continuing with your contented smallish steps? Could you write and storytell yourself through both messages, perhaps nesting one within the other, usually the smaller steps within the larger praxis and storyline like a personal journal entry, nested within each Earth Day headline. Of which hopes and dreams is your life iconic, as it is, and becomes obvious by simply unweaving your story backward, back through Earth's spacetime enculturing history? How you are different and the same as your grandmother writes the most recent episode in your epic of how you are different and the same as Grandmother Moon, languages the most recent episode in the universal epic of how you are different and the same as your Elder cousins, Sun and Earth, Yang on Yin, yet again, Fire's dynamic effect on Water's self-absorptive evaporation. Let's Spring those Baby Steps, girl! Stop with this winterish wilting in silo of shadow, please. Thanks. OK, so, who and/or what's next? I need to find a less expressive way of living. Oh, wait, that's called not living. Hmmm, what to do....

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