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This is my first Fibonacci.

I enjoyed working with this form.

NOT FOR The CONTEST ( already judged)

Syllables Per Line:  1 1 2 3 5 8 13 21 
Total # Syllables:  59
  Total # Words:  36

I look to blue, indigo, a perpetual omniscient azure. my heart in love, the only red that ameliorates my soul's raptures of sapphire light into the deepest of dark navy heavens we traverse ardor's endless universe
Suzanne Delaney

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 7/28/2016 8:42:00 AM
This was wonderful! Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 3/7/2016 5:15:00 PM
This is so lovely SuZ. Too bad it wasn't in time for the blue contest. Beautiful ethereal imagery! For your first, this is brilliant! #7
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 1:54:00 PM
Dear Connie: thanks for reading. I figured out how to center it here to keep the concrete form. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 3/5/2016 11:32:00 PM
I've never tried the form before, but I believe you passed with flying colors. I love the word "ameliorate" and the awe your poem captures. I ought to give this a go sometime...
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/5/2016 11:46:00 PM
Thanks Tim: Can't wait to see what you come up with. As best I can remember, set words to use in this were indigo, perpetual, azure, omniscient and soul.
Date: 3/4/2016 3:16:00 AM
Beautifully written, Suzanne. An excellent Fibonacci. T.J
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/4/2016 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Teppo: I am so pleased you like it. Cheers, SuZ