This Poem Is Awful
This poem is awful.
Its flow is ever so clumsy,
and its rhyme is not to be endorsed,
because it’s forced.
Like a bomb factory, it is full of bad devices:
average alliteration, similes like farts in an elevator,
and badly executed and slightly unnecessary...
enjambment. Plus it seems to be missing its
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Date Created: 8th March 2019
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Copyright © Nina Parmenter | Year Posted 2019
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