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There's Nothing Sweeter

Pantoum

There’s nothing Sweeter


There’s nothing in this world so sweet
As the love of mother nature
When the new dawn lights up to greet
The morning that feels oh so pure

Then life is such a precious thing
It’s then the whole world feels so grand
Oh yes such joy the new day brings
To each of us on this fine land

It’s then the whole world feels so grand
Each moment fills with sweet delight
To each of us on this fine land
When everything is shining bright

Each moment fills with sweet delight
It seems there’s nothing sweeter than
When everything is shining bright
It makes me such a happy man

It seems there’s nothing sweeter than
The birth of such a lovely day
It makes me such a happy man
Life feels so good in every way

The birth of such a lovely day
It makes the birds so sweetly sing
Life feels so good in every way
Oh lord such sweetness nature brings	

It makes the birds so sweetly sing
The flowers bloom so perfectly
Oh lord’ such sweetness nature brings
 It fills me up with mystery

The flowers bloom so perfectly
Right here is where I do belong
It fills me up with mystery
And makes my life a perfect song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/3/2019 5:11:00 AM
What a positive, bright, joy-drummed strut thru the Pantoum. I enjoyed every colorful stanza. All the best ... CayCay
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/3/2019 4:36:00 PM
G'day Cay Cay. always so nice to read your kind comments, my friend. I sincerely appreciate them. Have a great day....Peter
Date: 2/1/2019 8:32:00 AM
Nature's way at its best :)
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Swetha for your very kind comments. I appreciate them, my friend....Ppter
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:03:00 PM
Date: 2/1/2019 8:12:00 AM
Sweet to all the senses...A lovely write Sidney...
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Arturo for your lovely Comments, they are appreciated, my friend.....Peter
Date: 2/1/2019 5:41:00 AM
This is a perfect poem , so true and lovely to read! Excellent Peter :)
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi, for you mice comments. They are appreciated, my friend....Peter
Date: 2/1/2019 4:14:00 AM
It makes you truly appreciate what nature gives us yet some couldn't care less and continue to destroy our beautiful planet. Lovely pantoum Peter Tom.
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/1/2019 4:13:00 PM
Thank you So much Tom for your kind comments. Many people don't realize when they pull themselves away from mother nature they pull themselves away from life. I Appreciate your kind comments, my friend....peter
Date: 2/1/2019 4:05:00 AM
The web of life and this planet are sweet. Something very unusual happened here. I hope we can keep from messing it all up. If we start accounting for the cost of everything fairly, we could be OK, but the rules of accounting are messed up. It's all rather "head in the sand" stuff. Your poem is wonderful!!
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:19:00 PM
Hi Duke, nice to hear from you again, my friend. I think these creatures who rule this world are foolish enough to put wealth and power above anything else. They are destroying our barrier reef for coal. I appreciate your kind comments my friend....Peter
Date: 2/1/2019 2:38:00 AM
The title is spot on. So sweet in composition and ideas. A truly lovely pantoun.
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/1/2019 4:20:00 PM
G'day Victor, your kind comments are worth so much to me, my friend. I appreciate....Peter