The Wishing Well

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Once upon a time, there lived a Prince in a small kingdom.  The king was quite rich and saw that Prince Markus was well tutored and taught the best of manners.

He loved to go hunting in the forest, armed with a bow and arrow and a hawk, but he also loved nature.  So he never killed any animals.

It happened on his twenty first birthday that his king summoned him and told him it was time to find a princess and get married.  Prince Markus agreed and together they planned for a feast where the entire princesses in kingdoms around could come.  Then the young handsome man went hunting.

And so it happened that for once he left his friends and took a different path in the forest.  This led him to a glen where right in the middle of it was a well, a wishing well.  Prince Markus did not care for wishes.  He only wanted a drink.  Still he felt he should ask someone for it.

“Any one here?” he shouted.  Out of the woods came an old hag.

“So you are polite enough to ask, my Prince,” she said.  “Have a drink and one wish.  Only one, mind you.”

The Prince had his fill although there was still some water in the pail.  Suddenly from out of the woods slinked a brown wolf with a white patch on its forehead.  It looked as if it was dying.

“Oh, kill that beast,” cried the witch.  But the Prince was too kind-hearted.  He gave the wolf a drink.  He was not afraid of the wild animal because everyone loved him, humans and beasts since he never killed any.

The wolf drew near the Prince and licked his hand, then ran into the woods.  “Nasty beast!  Once she was a woman and drank my water without permission.  Now she will be a wolf.  Serves her right.”

The Prince said nothing and returned to his palace.

Soon a feast was prepared and many Princesses were invited.  The Prince would be a catch if he were to choose one of them.  But his eyes feel on one Princess who, not only was lovely and comely, but because near her was the wolf.  He fell in love with the Princess at first sight.

Soon a marriage was arranged, the cathedral was prepared and the Prince and the Princess were married.  Afterwards they went to a huge banquet while the villagers of both kingdoms were invited to partake of the festivities.

Only one thing worried the princess.  Her wolf lay at her feet, crying.

“We must do something for this wolf.  That witch must grant me my wish.”   Suddenly the witch appeared.  

“What is your wish, o Prince?” she asked.

“Do something to help that wolf.”  The witch was annoyed.

“Very well,” she said grudgingly.  Suddenly the ugly woman disappeared and the wolf stood up a turned into a lovely maiden.

“Why, she’s my maid who always cared for me,” exclaimed the Princess.  And everyone was happy and the Prince and the Princess lived happily ever after.

8 March 2017

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Date: 3/23/2017 1:13:00 AM
Congrats on a nice win. I wrote one called Massacre :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/23/2017 11:24:00 AM
I tried to find the story, but could not find it. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 3/14/2017 11:28:00 AM
Hi Victor, an enchanting tale. The journey through the page is a wonder from start to finish. This story does make me believe in the magic of this world. Excellent work Victor. This has to be a seven and a fave, Your Friend....Mike.
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Date: 3/14/2017 6:02:00 AM
Great story Victor. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/13/2017 10:39:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Victor
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:29:00 PM
Back for a pat on the back, congratulations Victor, I knew this could be a winner...
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:33:00 PM
:) Congratulations Victor!! Well done my friend! Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/13/2017 6:57:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Victor , I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love the story... Hugs Eve
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/14/2017 12:38:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I'm sorry I had no place for a dragon :)
Date: 3/10/2017 12:17:00 AM
This is so charming Victor :-) You have the spirit of a child full of wonderment in this absolutely marvelous tale of humour, hope and love. A most delightful read, wonderfully written. many blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:26:00 PM
What a delightful tale, I so enjoyed it Victor! Bravo! A well deserved 7.
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Date: 3/8/2017 6:22:00 PM
What a charming and captivating love story dear, Victor it is! It seems we have found your vocation to write stories that children and adults would love the same my friend! A seven times seven! Loved it! We need happy end in this cruel world!
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Date: 3/8/2017 4:24:00 PM
I love this story Victor. The imagery here is great and the story line excellent. Fit for a children's book. As usual it deserves far more points than 7. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:01:00 PM
I enjoyed this story Victor! Well done :)
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Date: 3/8/2017 12:40:00 PM
ohh, this was magical, victor... i like your child-like spirit!..huggs
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Date: 3/8/2017 11:56:00 AM
A wonderful story Victor..GL in the contest
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Date: 3/8/2017 10:38:00 AM
I love the happy ending.
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Date: 3/8/2017 10:11:00 AM
Dear Victor. First I always enjoy a fairy tale story. And yes, I love when I see words and thoughts of humanity. Yes again, I see and read humanity here within your words. Well done throughout.
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Date: 3/8/2017 10:02:00 AM
Beautiful story Victor... Lovely narration... I enjoyed it...
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Date: 3/8/2017 9:37:00 AM
What an enchanting story with an ending I didn't expect at all. Really nice Victor
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Date: 3/8/2017 9:19:00 AM
A wonderful, captivating tale, Victor. T.J
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Date: 3/8/2017 8:54:00 AM
Wonderful story, Victor.
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Date: 3/8/2017 8:38:00 AM
A wonderful read Victor, I hope you entered it in the fairy tale contest...
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