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The Unique Tenderness

I feel the unique tenderness
In this morn, with all my innerness,
With each cell and piece of my body,

I value all the summer’s scents,
As I know of blossom's evanescence,
And it being subtle and naughty.

The unique tenderness interwoven
With my chocolate feelings flowing
Towards you brings much wondrous doting…
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P.S. On the dawn I saw in the dream as a surreal artist painted by tossing and stressing in black and milk colors too many dots of different thinness and fatness, and he called it "The Unique Tenderness." Really, it was seen as the subtlest theme. Early in the morning, I tried to translate it into the language of poetry. Do not judge me strictly for my plagiaristic clumsiness, as my poetic amorphous amorousness allowed me and could. Thanks

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Date: 7/18/2018 8:11:00 PM
Tender touch Feelings nicely flown
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Valentina Iljina-Pechenova
Date: 7/18/2018 10:52:00 PM
Thanks, Dr Virinchi Mudumbai Acharya! So sweet are your words
Date: 7/17/2018 1:46:00 PM
Ooh, I do love those, "chocolate feelings flowing". Great lyric. The, "dots of different thinness and fatness", is an artistic technique known as, Pointalism; although it should possibly be renamed as, "The Unique Tenderness"; I do love that.
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Valentina Iljina-Pechenova
Date: 7/17/2018 11:30:00 PM
Thanks, M. L. Kiser! You inspire me, that's great
Date: 7/17/2018 12:16:00 PM
Valentina, you have penned a truly lovely poem here with tenderness! Well done, my friend! Pandita
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Valentina Iljina-Pechenova
Date: 7/17/2018 11:28:00 PM
Thanks, Pandita Sanchez! So valuable for me are your words, my friend! Tried my best to express
Date: 7/16/2018 11:47:00 PM
I very much enjoyed this poem! Do not worry, sharing with expression is always beautiful!
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Valentina Iljina-Pechenova
Date: 7/17/2018 11:23:00 PM
Thanks for mighty support, arthur vaso! Much appreciate your sharing the view