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The River

River of Love immersed
In nature’s soft pleasure
Echoes lasting bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/7/2012 10:15:00 AM
Tender and sensitive Haiku. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 7/10/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:19:00 PM
swinging cheers to you for the amazing award,olajide!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/9/2011 7:39:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! in this win and for this great poem...*-*junjun
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Date: 7/9/2011 4:00:00 PM
Congrats on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv.. awesome words of excellence..
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Date: 7/9/2011 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Olajide in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congrats Olajide...an excellent write on the contest photo.
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Date: 7/9/2011 9:03:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Olajide
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Date: 7/9/2011 8:49:00 AM
Olajide, a pleasure to see your poem near the top of the list. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/1/2011 3:11:00 PM
beautiful images with nice expression, olajide
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Olajide. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:34:00 PM
this is really pretty. But you are over 17 syllables if it is for a contest. To score well, you need to take off one syllable from line 1 and from line 3.
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