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Searching For A God

Pantoum

Searching For A God

Over the world I have me trod
Piercing into life’s mystery
Trying to find out where is God
Or even if he really be

I had spirituality
I felt it all within my soul
There was something deep within me
I always felt that I was whole

I felt it always in my soul
A certain kind of mystery
I always felt that I was whole
How I did feel so loose and free

A certain kind of mystery
It made me ask what’s life’s about?
How I did feel so loose and free
Though, always I was filled with doubt

It made me ask what life’s about
I never really understood
Though, always I was filled with doubt
Just looking it made me feel good

I never really understood
Yet so exciting was each day
Just looking it made me feel good
It, kind of made me change my ways

Yet, so exciting was each day
I never found what I looked for
It, kind of made me change my ways
I never could be really sure

I never found what I looked for
But me I really loved the game
I never could be really sure
I just don’t know, It’s still the same



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Date: 1/16/2019 11:45:00 PM
We are the same in that way, Peter.
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Date: 1/16/2019 10:50:00 PM
I think God has reached you and absolutely given you creative gifts. Pantoum form poems are not easy and yet you have written this smoothly. Thanks for sharing :)
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/16/2019 11:05:00 PM
Hey Heidi. I have felt the spiritual in me since I was a child, but I did not like to being made to be brainwashed by Popes and priests, Who really don't know the same as I. I worship the trees the birds and all the rest of nature. I think that we who have knowing in our souls we are the truth and the light . Thank you, my friend for your kind comments....Peter
Date: 1/16/2019 10:41:00 PM
I like this one. The honesty resonates for me. I see God everywhere - trees, wind, dog, cat, friends, family, newborn babies. I have sought him out in a scream twice when I thought I was going to die, and He took care of me both times.
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/16/2019 11:14:00 PM
Hi Caren you are one of the true spirits, and I connect to you. I look in my dogs eyes and feel God. I can look into the mirror and feel the beautiful silence that is in all of us. I just can't understand those who think they just have to read the so called holy book or listen to priest and say that they know, It don't come so easy. To really look at ones soul is to find the truth. Thank you, my friend as always for your understanding and kind words...Peter