Rainbow Colored Comouflage

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Rainbow Colored Comouflage

You didn't see me sneak into the crowd.  You were busy strutting it 
at the gay pride parade. Dressed like a  cha cha girl, decked in
a rainbow hat with plastic bangles that jangled with every sway. 
I recalled the fool hardy kid who beat me at gin rummy.  He was now
raining kisses at a raving crowd and getting right into the loud.  
I never figured you would trade in your old Mets  hat for hosiery 
but you did, and you kept it well hid....  
As we rounded a corner you turned, sibling sixth sense I guess?
 You looked right at me "No freakin way!"  I raised the signage
to your eye level, "Can we talk bro?" and so we did. 

The End. 
March 26, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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  1. Date: 4/23/2017 2:56:00 AM
    I literally disqualified this poem because I was sure that my brother had written this...Well, you get an at-a-boy and you would've placed in the top 5 had you not described me to a tee...Wow...I am in shock. (I am heterosexual FYI)

  1. Date: 3/27/2017 6:48:00 PM
    Well done " brilliant" .... ~*

  1. Date: 3/26/2017 11:07:00 PM
    Wow, Mystic. How did you do this? Incredibly subtle and stimulating. I enjoyed the description...I enjoyed the ending. Way to go. I'm with Doug on this...7 all the way. Hugs

  1. Date: 3/26/2017 2:43:00 PM
    In rating, 7 stones that skip 7 times across the water. : ) This is just so "right on." Love it.

  1. Date: 3/26/2017 6:22:00 AM
    What a fabulous piece for this title! Acceptance and Love, what a beautiful 'rainbow' it creates.:-) Wonderful writing, creatively expressed. many blessings to you, lynn