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Image result for salmon leaping into bears mouth

churning waterfall
salmon takes swift graceful leap…
into brown bear’s mouth

3/15/19

Submitted for Writing Challenge 2-March 2019-Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Dear Heart
3rd place


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Date: 3/19/2019 1:57:00 AM
its a great haiku .... i was just teaching my young singer the syllable count of haiku.... its a beautiful art form, yours shows the picture even if it wasnt present. :)
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/19/2019 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Frankii! They can be challenging at times to write but fun too.
Date: 3/18/2019 11:11:00 AM
Carol, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku and I love the image too ~
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Date: 3/18/2019 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! It was a fun contest, and it is always an honor to place. :-)
Date: 3/17/2019 7:22:00 PM
fabulous imagery Carol!many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/18/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 3/17/2019 6:59:00 PM
Great Haiku, Carol, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/18/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve!
Date: 3/17/2019 6:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, dear Carol.
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Date: 3/18/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 3/17/2019 3:32:00 PM
A well done haiku with awesome imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/18/2019 12:53:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Tania!
Date: 3/17/2019 3:20:00 PM
- Congratulations, Carol :)
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/18/2019 12:53:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/15/2019 7:31:00 PM
oh the irony of nature! First a free feel and then another's meal!
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/15/2019 7:56:00 PM
Lol. Good point!
Date: 3/15/2019 1:26:00 PM
- A skilled fisherman :) - Well done, Carol :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/15/2019 1:34:00 PM
Yes, those bears are skilled fishermen. Lol. Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/15/2019 1:17:00 PM
'Twas snapped right up! Great haiku, Carol! :)
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Carol Connell
Date: 3/15/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!