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Darkness all around, nothing visible,
All hopes down, nothing seemed feasible,
As i sat in an empty room full of thoughts,
Where actually i went wrong?
Answers for these questions i sought. 

I missed, i cared, i excessively loved you,
To the height of madness, obsessively adored you,
The beautiful eyes, the luscious thick black hair, 
Admired you so much, your softness so rare.

From the moment i woke to the time i slept,
Eat, smiled, laughed with you and even wept, 
All the time i wanted you with me,
Even if it is a little time i get free.

Initially u loved my maniac behavior,
All the time YOU, my madness never a failure,
Slowly you began to push me away, 
And started complaining about me in every way. 
''Possesive, angry, height of banishing freedom,
I feel like a princess imprisoned in a kingdom!
You dont understand me whatsoever,
My thoughts and views are nothing to you but haver. 
Don’t stick to me day and night please,
 I want my space for the stress to release. 

A gush of sorrow flowed through my heart,
In pieces it shattered and scattered apart,
Where was i wrong, i began to wonder?
Was loving too much, a point to ponder?
I only loved you with sky as the limit,
And wanted the best for you instead of cheap tricks and gimmicks, 
With a hope that you would be only mine,
As my wife and angel guarding me all life,
But your words don't show that your happy with me,
All the sacrifices i make are thus worthless indeed,
So whats the point of my loving you so crazy? 
When all you want is your space comfortable and easy? 
Am i a bot for romantic poems and care,
To cheer you up everytime and emotions to share? 
Or do you want me to love but in boundaries?
So that you have your own time and luxuries?
Or may be you want me to agree all what you say?
For your happiness each and every day, 
Because my love for you will always be infinte,
As no one can ever love you in the world as i might,
Or May be i am too dumb to know,
To love is to just bow down to the flow,
Because i want you in my life in failures and success,
Because only in you i will always see my princess.

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Date: 5/1/2018 7:50:00 AM
Okay if i know such a girl.. would you be interested? :D
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Suraj Grover
Date: 5/1/2018 7:52:00 AM
Checkout your soupmail! :D
Date: 5/1/2018 7:37:00 AM
"Girls" :D you're silly.. :D find around, or book urself in marital sites.. there u might get some girls with these qualities.. :D
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Date: 5/1/2018 7:39:00 AM
Woah...! I am not at that age for marital sites ...!! They are so cliché! :D
Date: 5/1/2018 7:26:00 AM
By the way, how do u think i may suggest you the girl with that qualities.. ? :D
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Date: 5/1/2018 7:29:00 AM
Cmon, you might know some girls with those mentioned qualities...i guess??? :D
Date: 5/1/2018 7:14:00 AM
HAAHAAH... :D well, after reading your poem i got to know that you must be a really loving person.. :) because nowadays no man does things fr a girl n get loneliness n disappoinment in return.. n if they do realize d girl's like that.. then too they wont take her seriously n would rather concentrate on what they can extract frm her.. :) so eventually u ll meet a girl of the qualities i mentioned cuz karma's a big thing! A person who loves u will always make u happy than whom u love.. :) n if its both sided.. then your already lucky! :)
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Date: 5/1/2018 7:16:00 AM
Yeah! True that! Still i am open to suggestions, you may never know how you might meet the chosen one! Hahaha.. :D
Date: 5/1/2018 6:40:00 AM
Sorry.. i hope u read the full comment.. :) its updated now.. :)
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Date: 5/1/2018 6:42:00 AM
I did read the updated one Amelia, i can understand your view. And btw why dont you suggest someone with those qualities you mentioned? :D
Date: 5/1/2018 6:32:00 AM
Hi suraj,i m sorry to say but there's no such thing called "space" in love.. if that is true then why would our parents not want space from us nd tolerate us 24/7 ? I understand smtyms we aint in a good position of mind but, using this word all the time for personal comfort is just an escape! A girl who truely loves a man will always be available fr you.. to talk with u.. no matter how much stress or problms shes undergoing herself.. she would b d happiest if u woud stretch the conversation longer n longer.. n wud always to meet u n be around u.. because being in ur company..thats what makes her life cheerful.. :) i would never say such a cruel thing fr a girl but, u should leave this girl.. :) u deserve much better friend.. :) get urself a girl with d above qualities mentioned.. :) lots of love from amelia.. :)
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Date: 5/1/2018 6:34:00 AM
Absolutely right Amelia! :)
Date: 2/19/2018 5:57:00 AM
Its said that,there's no true love without a heartbreak.But it could be realized that one can go through a million of heartbreaks just to grasp once their love so sweet. Amazing poetry Suraj... ~sophie
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:00:00 AM
Absolutely true! Thank you for reading sophie! Much love! :)
Date: 9/24/2014 10:12:00 AM
A very deep and creative write and a very thoughtful love poem. I felt this so deeply and understood so much. Thank you for sharing this work of art.... Sharon G.
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