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Bikini Atoll under thermonuclear cloud - derelict beauty March 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 4/18/2021 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Keith :)
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Date: 4/18/2021 1:09:00 AM
I loved your clever fitting ending to this entry Keith. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:44:00 AM
God bless you, Connie. Hope you are happy and well.
Date: 3/19/2015 11:31:00 AM
thank you for the reply, have a nice day...PD
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Date: 3/18/2015 11:41:00 PM
well done Keith...PD
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Date: 3/18/2015 11:08:00 PM
KEITH, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/18/2015 1:49:00 PM
this is a cool sounding 'ku!! So there is an atoll with that name Bikini?
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:37:00 AM
Inspired subject matter and an excellent rendition, Keith. Congratulations on a fine win. // paul
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Date: 3/17/2015 8:09:00 PM
A more sensory line 3 would have made a stronger haiku, but it was VERY unique, thanks so much for the entry. Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/17/2015 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Keith! Very poignant. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/17/2015 6:15:00 PM
Indeed is very sad, but so truthfully done, Keith !! Congratulations!!
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Date: 3/17/2015 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Keith, a sad but truthful write. BG
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Date: 3/17/2015 5:56:00 PM
very clever haiku - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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