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Opportunity Lost

Love Exciting, respecting, valuing, Dreams of a lasting and satisfying love Until the day, distracted he crossed a lonely street, Unexpected mad driver hit my love and Mangled he slowly died. Nightmare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/30/2019 3:37:00 PM
Oh that theme of love lost. You put a very interesting slant on it Victor
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Date: 2/1/2019 6:17:00 AM
I marvel at the depth, construction , and nightmarish horror you achieved using this poetry form my friend. Such to me is the mark of a fine and true poet! A fav..
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Date: 1/30/2019 1:19:00 PM
This happens too often, Victor. Beautifully written in a challenging form!
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Date: 1/30/2019 12:44:00 PM
Hi Victor, I'm sure I will have nightmares tonight - disturbingly beautiful and sad but loved it! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:03:00 AM
Wow, Victor! What a turn, a nightmare for sure. Well done!
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:28:00 PM
An awful tragedy...
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Date: 1/29/2019 6:56:00 PM
Very evocative and powerful write Victor, like this form too.
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Date: 1/29/2019 3:18:00 PM
Sad, tragic and heartbreaking. Your thoughts lift my emotions and then- I feel lost. This touches me so deeply. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/29/2019 2:56:00 PM
I see you wrote from male perspective. It's great seeing you try different forms like this one, Victor.
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Date: 1/29/2019 4:08:00 AM
Love this form, Victor, and you write it so well..awesome poetry
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:27:00 PM
A happy verse that sadly ended in tragedy, well written Victor. Tom.
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Date: 1/28/2019 9:19:00 AM
what a stark ending, victor.. still, an impressive work which stirs the senses... huggs
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:39:00 AM
I too say, WOW!!! a very deep write. You have not lost your words for writing. Well done my friend. ~`*
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:12:00 AM
WoW! Victor, Everything was so lovely and happy. Then an unfortunate turn of events. You captured both, very well! Good job:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:33:00 AM
Joy turns to sorrow.. nicely penned Victor..
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:30:00 AM
Such happy beginning--so sad an ending! Two extreme emotions..well expressed, Victor.
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:16:00 AM
Your dark side I see, well written my friend
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Date: 1/28/2019 6:42:00 AM
Victor, the words that give form to your Diamante illustrate the flowing shape that most of our lives fit into, though this life ends in tragic abruptness.
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Date: 1/28/2019 6:36:00 AM
from happiness to tragedy in a few short seconds, makes you appreciate every second we have Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2019 6:15:00 AM
Perfect Diamante yet sad ending. So beautifully written, Victor. So Happy to see you again. Happy writing!
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Date: 1/28/2019 5:55:00 AM
Opened with the pinkish glow of love and the end displayed the darkness of a horrifying nightmare.
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:50:00 AM
Nightmare of nightmares my friend, Victor! A splendid Diamante of a horrific story! Hope just a fiction!
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:39:00 AM
- From "Love to Nightmare" ... gives me a powerful diamond, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:29:00 AM
Victor, this started so optimistically upbeat, and then bam! You hit me between the eyes with the mad driver. So sad, but a lovely diamante, my friend, and the typing of it is wonderful. If you stand across the room and look at it, it looks like a perfect diamond!
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