Opportunity Knocked

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Don't laugh first try at this form lol!

 

 


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                   I thought if I opened the door
                His love would flow right through
                     But instead he shut it on me
                       Not mad but a bit irritated
                 Says one thing then does another
                   He didn't mean what he implied
                 They say us women are confusing
                Have they ever looked at themselves
                      I think we are not that far apart
                        Both part of the human race!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/18/2018 9:57:00 PM
Your verse is free and appeals to me! Nice one Brenda :) xomo!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/18/2018 10:24:00 PM
I just don't get it lol it doesn't flow! But thank you Maureen very much!
Date: 1/18/2018 4:16:00 PM
Hey! Welcome to the free verse side! This is a great poem Brenda. I am wondering what made you decide to try your hand at it?
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/18/2018 5:07:00 PM
Stop lying James LMAO! You know I have wanted to but no help so I tried yes failed but gave it a go!
Date: 1/18/2018 10:29:00 AM
No we're not that different, maybe a few things different, well let me rethink, lots of differences. Excellent first free style
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/18/2018 10:36:00 AM
OK I can laugh LMAO! It sucks don't lie lol! Thank anyway Tim! Now if I can stop laughing!
Date: 1/18/2018 1:13:00 AM
Truth in this one and wisdom!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/18/2018 1:24:00 AM
Thanks Andrea but truth it's my first at this form and not too sure about it!lol!
Date: 1/18/2018 12:35:00 AM
LOL, you made me smile!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/18/2018 12:56:00 AM
Art is it that bad ! Lmao!