"Oops"

Bank of reptilians ready to dine,
Dinner is served on a parachute line
  The right place at the wrong time,
  Compliments, the dinner wine,
Smooch goodbye the place, where the sun don't shine,

For: "To Die For" Limericks
In honor of: Carolyn Devonshire
Placed #4

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2010 10:24:00 AM
congrats John for your win with this-- gosh sometimes timing is indeed everything huh? enjoyed reading this-- "Oops" indeed! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:00:00 PM
Too funny! I think that I would have put the Holy Spirit to test as I would have been walking on air! Great poem!
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Date: 7/15/2010 6:42:00 PM
This one is so funny...great limerick. Thanks for the 3rd place in your contest. It's nice to be back in the circuit...at least part-time. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/15/2010 6:54:00 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one..Congratulations on the win...Good job..Sara
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Date: 7/14/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congrats on the 4th place win, John.
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Date: 7/14/2010 3:50:00 AM
Wow! That paints such a vivid picture. Good One! John. Love, ainie
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:16:00 PM
Great entry! Congratulations. Love Joyce
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Date: 7/13/2010 1:25:00 PM
Lol! Ouch! Congratulations on your win: )
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Date: 7/13/2010 11:13:00 AM
Hehe, nice one John. It's kool to see the observations of the picture in Limerick form. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "To Die For"Limericks. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:00:00 AM
A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:48:00 AM
Congrats, John. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:39:00 AM
Wonderfully witty, John. Congratulations on your win! There were many witty entries. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:39:00 AM
yuck, but I like it!!
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:22:00 PM
great job, john, I think it will do well in the contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:55:00 PM
A nice Limerick. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:20:00 PM
I can only imagine what happened when he landed-I'm kinda afraid to know what happened actually! Wonderful Limerick Moses!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:00:00 PM
Reads like a winner...Good luck in the contest...Sara
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